Date: April 02 2021 4:24 PM Title: Part 1/4
Great read, really enjoyed it!
Awesome descriptions and amount of details here, really took me along for the ride.
I was sure that Nathan was also shrunken and lost / stepped on somewhere - his disappearance appeared too sudden and convenient, given the discovery of shrinking device in his room. The fact that this didn't materialize felt like a bit of a missed opportunity to me :)
You put great work out, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you've enjoyed this story.
Come to think of it, I probably should've done something more with the other guy. I comitted a "what happened to the mouse" trope by not doing so. Oh well, I'll keep that in mind next time. Thank you for the suggestion.
Date: January 05 2021 5:50 PM Title: Part 1/4
Awesome first chapter.Loving your style and the details.
Author's Response:
Thank you Lina, I'm glad you like the story. Part 2 just dropped, enjoy.
Date: January 05 2021 2:28 PM Title: Part 1/4
Nice start. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you, more to come.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2021 5:12 AM Title: Part 1/4
Excellent work, my friend. I'm really excited to read more of this. Your writing was clean, clear, and crisp. And the descriptions of the giantess from his shrunken persepctive really got my heart pounding.
Author's Response:
Thank you, happy to hear it. More to come. : )