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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 6:23 PM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

Good chapter but feel Lindsey shrinking at that moment was to convenient but guess this is to keep Natalie's rampage going i guess. Really hoping Natalie ends up shrinking in front of the new Aubreigh would be a great sight to see.


Author's Response:

Yeah, I always intended for it to be a cheap convenient moment. Lazy writing, I guess. At one time I intended for Nat to shrink and be owned by Aubreigh by the end of the story... but I don't see me doing that at this point. i can't think of a realistic way to do that without resorting to lazy writing. For now, I just want the two characters to bond and get darker together. But you're not the only one who wants to see Natalie shrink, so I might write an alternate ending when the story is over.

Regardless, thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 5:47 PM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

Forgot to add a rating! Also I loved how Aubreigh got off to dominating Lindsey.  Wonder if she will enjoy grinding against whole buildings! Might lead to a flood in the streets...

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 5:22 PM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

Great update...hopefully there will be another soon? I can't wait to see Natalie and Aubreigh tower over the buildings of Timberline looking like real giantesses! Will really let them live out their fantasies then! Hopefully there will be lots of are footplay.  Any hint on whether either Natalie or Aubreigh will shrink there? Part of me still would love to see Natalie shrink just as Aubreigh fully becomes like her mother. 



Author's Response:

Yep, I'm writing the next chapter now. I think seeing them in Timberline will be fun, for sure. I'm not too sure about Natalie or Aubreigh shrinking to be honest..., it's something I considered when I first started the story (having a proper ending and all), but I don't think so. I think they will continue to feed off each other and get darker and darker. At least, that's the plan! Thanks for the review... and the rating!

(Although... I could always write an alternate ending, who knows!)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 12:42 PM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

Really liking this story and can’t wait to see sexy mrs. Beaumont walk in a tiny community. I’m also really interested to see what happens with the tinies and hope you decide to include a couple scenarios from their perspective. Like how it feels to have the giant Beaumonts stomping around and maybe the tiny dishes rattle a bit or what have you. Also is this sanctuary guarded by some kind of security guard that Mrs. Beaumont needs to seduce to not only get in this area but possibly have the cameras turned off as well.
Anyways I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Ps how does Timberland keep out animals let alone people, is it in some kind of warehouse or something?

Author's Response:

I'm writing that chapter now and yes, I'm doing most of it from the tinies' perspective rather than the giants POV. The sanctuary city's were always, in my mind, as being in big warehouses, safe from the harsh elements as well as intruders and other animals. Thanks for reading, I'm glad your liking the story!

Reviewer: SizePrincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 11:20 AM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

I liked that you decided to make this chapter a "bridge" between the last one and the next. 

A nice little (hehe, little) interlude here before Natalie goes to Timberland.

Was great seeing Penny again, and she's still only a day into her new position under Natalie and Aubreigh. 

Lindsey should have really been nicer to Natalie and Aubreigh XD Being a bitch got her the consequences she deserved.

I loved that you gave Aubreigh the chance to interrogate her. The scene of her using only her heel to get the info out of Lindsey was great, especially Aubreigh's inner monologue, the power and control coursing through her, as well as the eroticism she finds from having such a position over a tiny was a good read, as well as exploring her in this new attitude. 

And how she threatened not just to kill her, but to let her recover and torture her again. That would definitely fill a tiny with fear XD

And nice work with the armpit play, another hot kink that is fun to see. And Aubreigh utilizing more areas of her body and exploring that, is a great way to test different methods of tiny torture. 

I loved this chapter, and can't wait to read more. 

Natalie's coming for you Andrew XD (and the others) 

They're gonna regret ever setting foot out of their home. (Regret, I can assume, will come under Natalie and Aubreigh's feet, among oher things)




Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, Penny's life doesn't seem to be too easy now. Haha! And lettings Aubreigh interrogate her I thought was a great way to expand her character into a darker direction. Also, shows that she still wants her mom's approval. Thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2021 6:38 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson

Next chapter coming soon?



Author's Response:

😉👍🏼

Reviewer: pequeno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2021 5:28 PM Title: Natalie's Business Lessons

Wow! this is a great chapter.



Author's Response:

Awesome! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: titantonic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2021 10:43 AM Title: Natalie's Business Lessons

Great content! Loved the boot stuff...



Author's Response:

Thank you. Boot stuff is great!

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2021 9:07 AM Title: Natalie's Business Lessons

What a twist! Hope they get the tinies back!



Author's Response:

Definitely throws a wrench in Natalie's day, for sure. I can't wait to write about them getting them back. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2021 6:51 AM Title: Natalie's Business Lessons

Nat deserves it all



Author's Response:

She does indeed 😉



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She does indeed 😉

Reviewer: SizePrincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2021 1:03 AM Title: Natalie's Business Lessons

Yet another amazing chapter!

Natalie shows she's not just dominant over Tinies, but also other full sized people and in the business world.

I love how she quickly just shot Jennifer down (and the affair!! Andrew was screwed before, but now he's well and trully fucked XD)

I love how Natalie threatened her with financially buying up the shares, but also revealing Jennifer's infidelity, really going for the jugular there.

And Penny!!

What can I say, she really should have been more nice to Natalie. 

The coffee cup interrogation was so cool, and the threat of her finger on the button! You clearly had fun with this chapter, and I had fun reading it. The way she casually threatened her with such a fate, and then mouth play FOLLOWED by underfoot/in-shoe content. 

Penny has only just begun to scratch the surface of the cruelty of Natalie Beaumont, and I can't wait to see where it goes. 

And that cliffhanger! Ooh, I am excited to see Natalie and Aubreigh drag their tiny friends and family (and slaves XD) back to them. 

As always, a great read, and I am so looking forward to more. (and as always wishing Natalie could adopt me XD I want this cruel GTS Mommy ) 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked it. It was definitely a lot of fun to write. And yeah, Andrew's not in for a very good time. I'm really looking forward to writing what's next!

Reviewer: NS Old Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2021 12:50 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson

Hey!

 

Nice story (can be better, but fetish stuff good)!

 

I hope what your justice side be stronger your horny side, and we see happy end... for those who stay alive...

 

P.S. (I hope what someone kick Natalie's sadistic ass, she need it)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I think? 😂

Reviewer: Minivoid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2021 1:57 AM Title: Changes

This is a great story overall. The characters are memorable and play off of one another really well. Although, Natalie definitely steals the show for the most part. Amazing work!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much 😊 and I agree, Natalie is such a fun character to write for!

 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2021 10:34 PM Title: Changes

I don’t know how this story passed under my radar. It’s the type I love – character driven, with great feet scenes - and I just wasn’t aware!

Reading the reviews, I think I am a minority When I say I hope Natalie Beaumont SHRINKS AND DIE!!! Ok. Sorry, lost control there, but I am back. Yes, you wrote a very despisable villainess.

But I am most stuned with Aubreigh character and it’s changes! First clearly enjoying the power trip and now, grieving and feeling angry because of the guilty she now bears. She has broken, like Natalie (that bitch!) noticed.

Since the beggining Aubreigh is clearly insecure about how others perceive her and right now she is more emotionally dependant of her family ties than ever, this idea that her family and friends are perfectly fine and have to stay within her grasp is proving to be her undoing.

It costed her friends life, but that obviously wasn’t enough.  which is why I believe Aubreigh will only wake up, will only come back to being something like the sister Thomas once knew...  when Thomas dies... and by her hand. Yes, I am saying that, if things don’t change course, Aubreigh will destroy exactly what she so hardly tried to protect... her fragile ego.

I might be way off, but that is the feeling I am getting.

Thank you for sharing this story, I already favorited it. Also, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.



Author's Response:

Hey man, thanks! I did take the summer off, so the story has been buried for a while.

And yes, haha, I'm afraid you're in the minority for sure! Natalie Beaumont is a guilty pleasure of mine. She's great fun to write for, especially if you like cruel giants, which I do. I have the next few chapters mapped out... but I'm unsure of how it will end for sure... but don't expect Natalie to shrink and die, lol. (I did have an idea for that type of ending, but I tossed it out pretty quickly.) I admit, the writer side of me wants to see a proper ending complete with justice... but the fetishbside of me says "nah, she has to win".

Aubreigh's character has also been very fun and satisfying to write for. Although see will never be on the same level of apathetic cruelty like her mom, she will do some pretty unforgivable things.

As for who else dies, and by whose hands (or feet, lol), well, that's anybody's guess! Thanks for reading and thanks for the thoughtful comment. I hope you enjoy what's coming up!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2021 12:19 PM Title: Changes

So excited you continued! I can't wait to see what Aubreigh does with them, and I really hope they all make it to the shrunken city only to have Natalie and Aubreigh break in and play with the whole city as real giantesses towering over buildings and playing car and mouse looking for their tiny family!



Author's Response:

That's awesome! I'm glad you like it. And yes, that has remained in the outline. Is coming up in a couple chapters or so.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2021 4:26 AM Title: Changes

I like this direction! Natalie HAS to come out on top at the end of this story!



Author's Response:

I like this direction too, so I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it. Natalie's character is definitely a guilty pleasure of mine.

Reviewer: Pinobr Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2021 3:27 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson

Thank's for not stoping...

 

I Love your story



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :)

Reviewer: SizePrincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2021 10:38 PM Title: Changes

Brilliant!!

Simply brilliant.

I am loving this darker turn, it feels like a natural progression for Natalie and finally Aubreigh has been swayed to Natalie's side, mother and daughter are now on the same page (though Aubreigh has a long way to go)

The content in this chapter was again top notch, love Natalie dealing with her husband (that finger domination XD And how she got him to shut up with such a casual display of physicality)

And Aubreigh using her feet (and the spatula) on Nate like that. 

The Aubreigh and Natalie conversation over breakfast was great too, it was funny, serious, but also a bit heartfelt having them re-establish their familial bond and Aubreigh showing solidarity with her mother. 

(Also Aubreigh really getting ticked off by her siblings and the others, great stuff :D)

Cannot wait for more, especially now that things are finally taking shape and the law is being laid down in the Beumont household. 

Keep up the great work. :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback. Aubreigh does have a ways to go for sure but she's already in a great position to deal out some serious pain and misery on the tinies. I just love it darker too, I was afraid to take the story any darker... but I'm going with my gut and I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: titantonic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2021 9:13 PM Title: Changes

Hey, I liked it! Nice return to form. I loved Natalie tormenting her husband with her finger and Aubrey teasing the tiny with the spatula, reminds me of an earlier chapter where Natalie did that with her hand lol

I take it you're not going with Aubrey turning good route?



Author's Response:

Thanks. And no... it was somethng I considered. The writer part of me wants to see the bad guys get whats coming and for good to win... the fetish side of me likes the depressing endings where no justice is served. So we'll see. I've still got some scenarios I want to explore with this family. Haha.

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2021 6:49 AM Title: Family Drama

do you plan to continue?

Author's Response:

Yes! Just posted a new chapter.

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