[Report This]Date: January 29 2023 4:44 AM Title: Bonding
You are finally back, that's so cool, this story is one of my favorites!
Overall really cool chapter and a great way to return, I wonder what retconning the deaths of Carmen and Sophia will do for the story, but I'm interested.
Natalie is as delightfully devilish as ever, with way too much luck on her side, everything always goes right for her, but that's okay cause she's cool.
I think Aubreigh is way too far gone now, she saw a person being murdered in cold blood entirely because of her mother and got wet, no matter how much she tries to deny it, she's just like her mother.
The chapter was fun, and the giantesses scenes were great, especially the pedicure, Andrew in Aubreigh flip flops, and the worker getting killed by Brittney, I loved those.
The story is engaging as ever, I really want to see what's next, and I hope both Natalie and Aubreigh get the death penalty they so obviously deserve :) (even though this story seems to be heading to a much darker and gloomier ending, but I'm still believing)
Author's Response:
Thanks man. As for the death retcon, when I reread it, it just seemed too sudden and out of the blue. I want to slowly build up to any deaths that there might be. Maybe they will die in the future, or not. I don't know yet. But for now, they will be involved in the shenanigans moving forward.
I know, things are way too easy for Natalie. I love it though. It's almost funny to me to write it that way.
I agree that Aubreigh is evil, but doesn't realize it yet. However, she is still different from her mom because Natalie does it for power and fun, she doesn't get turned on by it like Aubreigh does. (Unless, of course, you count the insertion scenes.)
I still don't know what will happen to Aubreigh and Natalie, honestly. I don't even want to think about the ending yet. I will dislike either way I go. I want them to get what they deserve, while at the same time, wanting them to win. So I won't even be able to please myself with whatever ending I write. So, for now, I'm just going to play around in the story with various situation and scenarios that have popped into my head during my hiatus.
I'm glad you like the story! Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2023 4:37 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Just saw an update! Yay! I love this story :)
Author's Response:
Hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2023 4:37 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Just saw an update! Yay! I love this story :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you do!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2022 7:03 PM Title: Good Morning
dude if you have time continue this miracle
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I hope to write more often now.
Date: October 21 2022 3:51 AM Title: Good Morning
Really hope you continue, this story is one of the best.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it. I hope to keep at it more frequently now.
[Report This]Date: May 27 2022 1:37 AM Title: Good Morning
C'moooooooooon You can do it.
Author's Response:
Just did it ;)
Date: April 30 2022 10:04 AM Title: Good Morning
Are you still going to continue this story?
Author's Response:
Yes :P
[Report This]Date: April 17 2022 5:05 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
I don’t know why but I feel like I’m seeing Mrs. Beaumont everywhere waiting for the next update. At the grocery store, the gas station, the movie theater and even the dentist haha.
Anyways great story and I hope to see more soon.
Author's Response:
That's amazing if the story has impacted you that much. I never imagined!
[Report This]Date: March 31 2022 7:41 PM Title: Good Morning
Hi! Did you plan to continue this story? It's really excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and liking it. Yep, I'm continuing now.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2022 1:39 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
i can never wait for the next chapter: D
Author's Response:
Oh man, I’m working on it! Thanks for sticking with it!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2022 9:25 PM Title: Good Morning
Wow. I know you said this chapter was weak but I don't think so. This was great. I loved it! Full of alot of fetishy bits.
Author's Response:
Thanks man!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2022 2:05 PM Title: Good Morning
Great new chapter. Awesome dream sequence hopefully that is foreshadowing cause I’d love to see Aubreigh like that again and her reactions to everything were just perfect.
Now Ben seems to be more of Natalie’s favorite which is always a plus. I’m really intrigued as to why Andrew was acting kinda funny when Aubreigh mentions the board of directors and can’t wait to see how that pans out. Also at the end that little part of Aubreigh trying to peak into the tiny house to find her dad was great, I kinda wish more interactions with the tinies and giants involved these cute little homes. But man I can’t believe Andrew was ballsy enough to sneak into Natalie’s purse. Can’t wait to see how she punishes him now, hopefully with her giant sexy feet. Also love how the dream really didn’t seem to change Aubreigh’s interactions with the tinies and she seemed to want to please her mom even more so which was fantastic. Also Mrs. Beaumont swallowing Lindsay while forcing the others to watch perfectly illustrated her dominance while getting rid of an annoying character, kinda hope Brian is next unless he really starts to change.
PS
I really hope that they can get more tiny amenities from this board meeting and I really hope Ben can get Natalie off several times. Anyways great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Good ideas! I can't wait to write more Ben and Natalie interactions.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2022 2:14 AM Title: Good Morning
Whoa! That dream was insanely convincing! I actually believed it was real. I won’t go into the dream itself since I don’t want to spoil it for other readers on accident.
That whole incident with Ben was amazing! I love how Natalie just casually goes on about her day while Ben is struggling in peril.
Also, I like how you didn’t have Natalie panic when she remembered about Ben. She clearly doesn’t mind sexually torturing him, and I think Ben’s reactions are very satisfying since he enjoys it, but also fears for his life.
In addition, I love that comment about Ben being tailored to Natalie’s pussy. Hopefully that means that she will keep him down there even longer. Perhaps, she even forgets about Ben. Hmm, I guess not since I’m sure Ben’s movements will definitely be noticed.
I could see Natalie possibly becoming addicted to keeping Ben as her pleasure pet and that dynamic would work extremely well, especially with Andrew watching with jealousy. I mean, imagine Ben literally being able to sleep in bed with Natalie while Andrew could do nothing about it.
Another possibility is that Natalie uses Ben so much to the point where Ben starts fearing Natalie’s pussy, but she doesn’t care and sticks him back down there forever. Now, that’s kinda hot.
Either way, I’m glad there’s a new update and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I appreciate it. I’m really glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2022 10:01 PM Title: Back Home Again
Great chapter. I especially loved how Mrs. Beaumont humiliates her tiny husband not really into the spit thing but I felt like it worked really well in asserting her dominance but also how she has him be present for her orgasm with Ben who’s half their age is fantastic. Also love how Andrew feels even more inadequate because Ben is able to bring her to multiple thunderous orgasms while tiny. Just Natalie in general is perfect.
Now to get to those phone calls that Lindsey was so happy Aubreigh heard and was terrified by, I just can’t see the police call be anything other than routine as a way for the cops t check every possible avenue which I feel Natalie being Natalie could easily explain. The one I’m most intrigued about is by Andrea Collins. Cannot wait to see where this goes moving forward.
PS I’m glad to see Aubreigh’s change in personality. I also hope to see more of Mrs. Beaumont humiliate her husband.
Author's Response:
Thanks! More humiliation on the way!
Date: February 04 2022 11:30 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
still the best story on the site, looking forward to the next part
Author's Response:
Thank you 😊 I just started writing the next chapter last night. I was unexpectedly busy last month. But I’m hoping to have something by next weekend!
[Report This]Date: January 10 2022 1:07 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Hey, that was nice work, the way you continued the pace of the last chapter, continued the arc and finally dropped that twist before the cliffhanger. A real work of art.
I still think some of the dialogue could be more rounded, like you are still using double words here and there. But overall it's really impressive how far you've come as a writer. Mad respect.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks, I appreciate your kind words. Saturn Seven is one of my favorite stories, so I value your input!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2022 8:28 PM Title: Back Home Again
The hottest horror story ever made
Author's Response: Wow, I love that! I could use that as the tagline!
Date: January 06 2022 8:14 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
A great chapter as always. Natalie being the best character in this story, discovering that her husband was having an affair with another woman must have been hard for the poor thing. Luckily she has Ben, who is willing to do everything for her, and finally Natalie is already recognized as the goddess who should be hers. We can say that Aubreigh has very little to go to put aside all those trivial thoughts and continue to demonstrate her new true nature, and she can finally establish dominance with the little ones. The end was a surprise, hopefully The Beaumonts can get out of this situation, they have had to go through a lot to lose everything, which neither of them deserve. Waiting for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I’m working on the next chapter so it shouldn’t be too long now.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2022 5:46 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Very good story, well founded and very well narrated. It is a story that hooks you to continue reading it. Personally, I would not want Natalie to succeed. Every time I read a story in which the evil giants triumph I don't... feel a chilling sensation. I don't know if it will be sadness or something else. It is as if there were no justice. I'd rather Natalie and her daughter get the virus too and find themselves at someone's feet to see how it feels. Another thing that bothers me a bit is the little determination of the little ones when submitting. They accept everything simply out of fear. Not a trace of bravery. WOW, pathetic. But hey I guess that's the story hahahaha. I mean if it ends up the way I think it will, it's partly Lindsay's fault for her, not so little, betrayal.
Author's Response:
The fear aspect is what I focus on because it is what I like, personally. I try to have them show moments of bravery, but then they cower back out of fear…., fear of being hurt or punished…, they’ve even seen I few murders at this point, so if I were a tiny, I’d react out of fear myself. Like you said, it’s the story! Lol But I get that not everyone enjoys that.
I've gone back and forth in my mind if the giants should win or lose. I finally made it up and I’m sketching out the last few chapters now. Maybe you’ll like it… hopefully… but something tells me that maybe you won’t… 😬
[Report This]Date: January 06 2022 4:55 PM Title: Back Home Again
Oooh, This chapter was incredible! Finally Natalie gets recognition as a true goddess! And I wonder how they will be able to get out of this one? Hope it works out for them, Natalie is too amazing to lose
Author's Response:
Thank you! Natalie is a goddess, so I have a feeling she will be just fine 😉