[Report This]Date: February 13 2022 10:01 PM Title: Back Home Again
Great chapter. I especially loved how Mrs. Beaumont humiliates her tiny husband not really into the spit thing but I felt like it worked really well in asserting her dominance but also how she has him be present for her orgasm with Ben who’s half their age is fantastic. Also love how Andrew feels even more inadequate because Ben is able to bring her to multiple thunderous orgasms while tiny. Just Natalie in general is perfect.
Now to get to those phone calls that Lindsey was so happy Aubreigh heard and was terrified by, I just can’t see the police call be anything other than routine as a way for the cops t check every possible avenue which I feel Natalie being Natalie could easily explain. The one I’m most intrigued about is by Andrea Collins. Cannot wait to see where this goes moving forward.
PS I’m glad to see Aubreigh’s change in personality. I also hope to see more of Mrs. Beaumont humiliate her husband.
Author's Response:
Thanks! More humiliation on the way!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2022 8:28 PM Title: Back Home Again
The hottest horror story ever made
Author's Response: Wow, I love that! I could use that as the tagline!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2022 4:55 PM Title: Back Home Again
Oooh, This chapter was incredible! Finally Natalie gets recognition as a true goddess! And I wonder how they will be able to get out of this one? Hope it works out for them, Natalie is too amazing to lose
Author's Response:
Thank you! Natalie is a goddess, so I have a feeling she will be just fine 😉
[Report This]Date: January 06 2022 11:36 AM Title: Back Home Again
This chapter was hot! My goodness, that scene with Natalie was amazing! Loved the way she took control of not only Ben but also Andrew as he was helpless to do anything.
But first, I think I like this gradual change in Aubreigh. While she’s still having thoughts of being rational, it’s fun to see her kinda just be a little crazy here and there. She even uses the same devious tactics as Natalie, but the tinies don’t seem to know how to counter it. I feel like there should be someone to question Aubreigh’s motives without comparing her to Natalie since that will simply enrage Aubreigh. Still, it’s fun to see her taking control.
Anyway, the star of this chapter and this story is still Natalie and she did not disappoint this chapter. I mean, forcing her husband Andrew to watch as she fucks Ben in front of him was amazing!
I love how Andrew assumes that Ben is some random kid that Natalie has taken advantage of and he is surprised by Ben’s performance in bed. Little does he know about Ben’s fantasy of Natalie and how much he actually wants to please her as a giantess.
That sock ending was… interesting. I really liked how Ben was negotiating his place among the tinies to Natalie. And I’m glad she still sees him as below her. Although, I hope he becomes her favorite tiny from all this fun she is having and decides to use him for much, much more fun.
For a second there, I was really hoping Natalie would have Ben sleep in her panties again. I remember you said you almost had her carry Ben back home in her panties and now with Ben trying to get new sleeping arrangements, I thought this could’ve been a great opportunity for that.
Anyway, another fantastic chapter! I hope Natalie keeps playing with Ben and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I’m glad you liked the chapter! It was super fun and enjoyable to write. Especially the scene with Natalie that you mentioned.
Aubreigh is tricky to write because I don’t want her to become a clone of the Natalie character. The idea of somebody questioning her motive is an interesting idea… I might give that some thought.
And yes! I thought the idea of Andrew being helpless as he can only watch was incredibly humiliating and thus… kinda hot! I wonder how Andrew would react if he knew how Ben really felt about Natalie… 😳
The sock ending banter was also a lot of fun. It felt like a natural point for Ben to try and “score some points” with Natalie but then have her reassert her feelings and his place in life. The idea of her putting him under her feet was just to reinforce that he is nothing to her (although she knows, deep down, that he is her favorite tiny). And again… I ALMOST had her put him in her panties… but I’m saving that for the next chapter. Plus, I’m a foot guy at heart, haha!
Thanks for reading! And thank you for the very kind review! Hope you enjoy what’s next.
Date: January 06 2022 4:33 AM Title: Back Home Again
As always Ive been anticipating updates for this story every since I got hooked in the emerald package chapter. Superb Writing my guy!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks! That means a lot. The Emerald Package is one of my favorite chapters I’ve written.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2022 1:22 AM Title: Back Home Again
Fantastic! Loved Natalie in this chapter! And that cliffhanger…… man, I hope nothing bad happens to them.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope not either!
Date: January 05 2022 10:41 PM Title: Back Home Again
Great work, and love the cliffhanger. Not sure if there would ever be a new viral strain to grow Natalie and/or Aubreigh into real giantesses, but it would really be fun to see either of them as real giantesses and would be even more fun to see them literally grow out of their current predicament. The police wouldn't be able to stop giantess Beaumonts...
Author's Response:
Thanks! I always love hearing your ideas, they’re very interesting. While I don’t think I’ll explore that idea in the main story… it does sound like a really fun alternate ending! I’m already imagining it!