Date: April 30 2021 7:46 PM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
New update coming soon? Excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
It's coming... but slowly. I wrote the next chapter and hated it. I'm reworking my outline at the moment... the second half of the story was going to get super dark and I'm not sure I want to go that route anymore. So I'll tweak it, and re-write the next chapter and move forward. Thank you for your enthusiasm!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2021 8:45 PM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
My favorite story is coming out right now; this chapter cemented it. Usually, I don't like insertion stuff, but you made it quite enjoyable, and I love Ben finally getting some action. I love the characters as well. Keep up the amazing work.
Author's Response:
Awesome! I'm so glad you like it! And that means a lot that you enjoyed somehting you don't normally like, so thank you!
Date: April 21 2021 5:43 PM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
Great story, I hope you continue it soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Working on it now 🙂
[Report This]Date: April 20 2021 8:41 AM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
Nat is truly evil.
Author's Response:
Yes indeed 😈
[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 12:06 PM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
Wonderfully hot chapter, especially with Ben and Natalie. That cliffhanger about Aubreigh's dad, natalie's husband, is especially fascinating. Definitely looking forward to how Natalie will treat him. Can't wait for the next!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 5:28 AM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
Yes!!! This is what I'm here for! I love how Mrs. Beaumont doesn't put up with Thomas's shit anymore and just goes straight for the punishment >:) Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Natalie Beaumont is the meanest! And by that, I mean the best!
Date: April 19 2021 5:18 AM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
Well the two worst events have happened. Aubreigh had her chance to reflect on how she's been treating her siblings and friends, but ultimately failed to see how cruel and demeaning she was becoming. If anything, she actually became truly twisted that night given how quick she was to believe her mother and sneer at her former friends. Maybe they confronted her to stongly, but if that's all it took for her to run away from the consequences of her actions, she's destined to be weak willed and under Natalie's thumb.
And secondly, Natalie Beaumont failed to have a karmic shrinking. Instead her husband, who genuinely seems to care for his kids and called out his wife for degrading her shrinky kids in the early chapter, has now shrunk. I fear the next stage of Natalie grooming Aubreigh's behaviour will be asking her to punish her father for criticizing her behaviour or actions against shrinkys or ordering her to do something to help the shrinkys of the family. "You can't let a bug talk to you like that dear, remind him of his place".
Heck Natalie's first action getting back home will probably be to torment her husband in front of her kids after Thomas said he was going to tattle on her abuse. "Look at me Thomas. What is this pathetic bug going to do to help you? Don't forget I am your God. You live because I allow it." reminder treatment. Man I feel bad for the twins. An apathetic family that would've simpyl abandoned them on the roadside would've been better then a malicious one gleefully abusing their own diminished children and siblings.
Author's Response:
I know what you mean. It's a sucky situation for the tinies for sure. It's much for satisfying to read about the villains getting what's coming to them from a story stand point... but it's so much more fun (for me at least) seeing them get away with everything, for the moment. And you're right, Aubreigh is very weak willed and will be swayed by her mom in many other ways. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 5:06 AM Title: Aubreigh's Guilt
Ohh now things are heating up!!
I loved Aubreigh's sway to the dark side finally happening. Her frustration and anger bleeding into her mind and making her more and more aligned with her mother's philosophy.
The Ben and Natalie sexual content was so well done, and I love her just shutting Thomas down so easily.
I can't wait to see what she does to Brian (Maybe using him to teach Mrs Chen and Kelly a lesson XD)
And yes!!! Her husband has finally shrunk, time for Natalie to take control of her family in every sense of the word.
(A dark idea I kept thinking while reading this, was Aubreigh submitting her father to her feet, as Natalie says he needs to learn now that he can't be argumentative or disobedient, and has to go with what his "betters" are saying)
Or just squash him under her feet, Aubreigh maybe being pushed to the edge and just doing it, baptizing those feet in her first tiny-blood.
idk, just spitballing here, but I can't wait to see how things progress going forward now.
Natalie and her "real, true daughter" are about to have their lives changed for the better, and their tiny bug-family better get with the program, or expect to be squished.
Loving this more and more with every chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes! Her shutting down Thomas is something I love to see! I'm glad you liked the other things you mentioned too. They're cliche... but so fun to read and even more fun to write. I'm not sure how Aubreigh will be around her father yet... but I have a pretty good idea about Natalie! Haha!
As always, thank you so much for your thoughts and the review, I'm really glad you like it so far. I hope you like what's coming too!