Date: April 09 2021 5:46 PM Title: Ben's Humiliation
Few other ideas it would be interesting to see as you edit the plot outline....I'm really interested to see the role reversal forthcoming with Mr. Beaumont going from head of the family (and likely the largest member of the family) to tiny. I'm hopeful that a good amount of the perspective is from him as hesees his wife and daughter, formerly shorter than and dependent on him, now towering over him. His mental transition from head of family to tiny will be great, particularly as this is the first time in the Beaumont family there will be a role reversal given shrinking. The kids who shrank were already the youngest and thereby it wasn't as much as a statute or dependency reversal when they shrank. Further down the line, I'm not sure if one of those scenarios you're considering is where the tiny Beaumonts escape and move to a whole tiny town with those tiny houses Mr.. Beaumont designed,, but it would be fun if they did and Natalie and/or Aubreigh got into the tiny town as actual giantesses to find their tiny family members and play with the wholetoy town...like a game of cat and mouse! Just some thoughts, and awesome job as always!
Author's Response:
Damn, it's like you can read my mind!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2021 3:25 PM Title: Ben's Humiliation
Great chapter, but I was honestly hoping they would learn this chapter that Mr. Beaumont had shrunk...can't wait to see their response and interaction with him! Also, and hints on whether anyone else in the family shrinks after Mr. Beaumont? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I thought that was gonna happen this chapter too! What ended up being this entire chapter was originally meant to be just a quick page of fetishy stuff before moving on. But as usual... I got carried away and wrote too much. So I'm working on the next chapter now and getting things set up for back home. I don't have any hints yet as for anyone else who shrinks... mostly because I can't make up my mind. I keep scribbling out my outline and changing it four different ways. I have a bit of story to go before I need to make a decision... so I'll see where I'm at when I finally need to pull the trigger and go one route. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2021 5:18 AM Title: Ben's Humiliation
Aww yeah! Two giantesses are better than one! Super hot!
Author's Response:
That's for true! Haha
[Report This]Date: April 09 2021 5:02 AM Title: Ben's Humiliation
Aw yeah! Next chapter can't come too soon lol!
Author's Response:
Awesome! Glad you liked it!