[Report This]Date: April 01 2021 2:47 AM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
I like where this is going.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad to hear that. I started working on the next chapter a couple days ago and am really liking how it's coming out.
Date: March 30 2021 6:43 AM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Great chapter as usual
Author's Response:
Thank you rubber!
Date: March 29 2021 2:31 PM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Gregg you unlucky bastard
Love the story glad there's finally some vore and amazed how maliciously it was used . Been anxiously waiting for it since the early chapters. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Haha thank you very much! I added the tag way too early... I was really happy with how it was introduced into the story so I'm glad you liked it too. Thank you, I'll do my best to keep it going! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 29 2021 12:25 PM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
God, I love Natalie! I really hope she gets away with everytning in the end. That's the only thing I didn't like in All in a day's work. That the main giantess didn't win.
Author's Response:
I know... haha, I still need to go back and revamp that last chapter and add a epilogue. And since I already did a story where the big bad lost... I think this one will be different! Thanks for the review!
Date: March 29 2021 12:14 PM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
I hope there's a lot more story left to go, but this story seems ripe for multiple, alternate endings...maybe one where Whitney ends up in ultimate charge with everyone else shrinking, one where Whitney gets her comeuppance when she shrinks and the new, dark and playful Aubreigh is the only giant, any maybe even one where either Whitney or Aubreigh (or maybe even Emily) catches a variant of the virus and grows into a real, 400+ foot giantess. Hope we haven't seen the last of Emily when the Beaumonts leave their vacation!
Author's Response:
I'm assuming Whitney is a name change for Natalie :D I do that too! But yeah, there is a lot more story. Their trip being cut short was always in my outline since the very beginning. That way, a whole new set of circumstances could come from that. The only thing I don't have nailed is the ending, like I've said... it's tough! So many ways to go...
[Report This]Date: March 29 2021 4:33 AM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Curious to learn about Kelly's moms sister.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Keep your eyes peeled!
[Report This]Date: March 29 2021 4:20 AM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Wow a lot happened this chapter. A tad fast for Aubreigh but well-written nonetheless. Looking forward to Natalie and Ben for sure!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you felt it was well written. And yes, a bit fast... I'm not the best at pacing and wanted to pick things up a bit. I'll have to see how it works. But she's definitely not going to be a clone of Natalie.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2021 2:27 AM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
!!!!!!!!!!!! YESSS!!!!!!!
Ok damn! This chapter was loaded with so much great content.
I love Emily and Natalie both swaying Aubreigh to the Dark Side XD
Aubreigh's slow indoctrination is now coupled with her seeing an "evil" tiny (he may have been innocent, who knows, but the giants sure think not)
And I feel that an act like he alledgedly commited would definitely push Aubreigh into a more harsh Giantess mode, and we saw this with Nate.
I am so excited for the next chapter!
You've set up some amazing content following what's happened here.
Natalie is finally showing her Tiny-Kids the depths of her thoughts on them now (the way she called Aubreigh "my real daughter" was so good! I got chills (good chills)
And the fact she's outright stated if her kids keep pushing her, she's going to kill them/stomp them/eat them.
She's really just waiting for the right moment (or to be pushed too far by her entitled Tiny kids) before killing them.
Her shutting them down with "your an inch tall" and "Your speaking words but not saying anything" was so great to hear.
And the punishment of Carmen was so cool!
It finally got Thomas to realize "Oh shit! She can punish me, my high and mighty attitude doesn't mean shit afterall" XD
I really hope Carmen unloads her anger onto him when she's released.
Bye Gregg XD (Her using him as a scare tactic was also another golden moment)
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Natalie is still an amazing badass giantess, and I can't wait to see where things go from him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review again! I really appreciate the specific things you enjoyed reading. It helps me see what's working. But yes, I really anticipate Natalie upping the severity of her punishments and pleasures. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2021 11:43 PM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Wow! Aubreigh is really changing her approach to tinies VERY quickly! I'd love if she used them not for punishment but to treat herself more like with the pedicure. Maybe she uses her siblings as foot massagers by rolling them between the soles of her feet!? Also will anyone else in the family be shrinking any time soon?
Awesome as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! Yes, a bit fast, a decision I may regret but I wanted to pick up the pace a bit. We'll see if it works!
That's a good idea and one I think I plan one writing about. And yes, Natalie's husband shrinks, thus what cuts their trip short and forcing them to return home early. Which I have some more things planned.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2021 11:28 PM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Wow! Great job! I loved seeing Aubreigh turn like this. And Mrs. Beaumont is so mean! I love it. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I love a mean Natalie Beaumont!