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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2021 11:19 PM Title: One Tiny Night Stand

Hope all is well! Can't for the next update. This story is definitely one of the ones I check in on. Such a great build up with interesting characters.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2021 1:44 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand

A shorter (but still sweet chapter)

I kind of like the long ones, but the short ones are nice too.

So much great content still coming through here, Natalie continues to be the MVP of this story, and her dominating personality is a treat to keep reading.

The absolute disregard she has for Gregg was so well shown here (as said before, tinies trying to demand equel rights and authority over a giantess like Natalie quickly fails when this woman is literally toying withi his body and overpowering him wth her fingers)

The vaginal insertion and use of him as her sex toy was sooo hot !! :D 

A great read definitely. 

Gregg trying to tell her to let him go home to his family.....dude, she is basically keeping you alive as a novelty/sex toy, she could snuff you out against her clitoris and not give two shits, and would probably do so 'in front' of his family and not care.

I love love love that you made Mrs Chen's sister have been killed by Natalie!!

I can't wait to see what she does to her in the next chapter.

(And as always, I am hoping Aubreigh either shrinks, or is seduced to the dark side.....or hell, Shrink Natalie's husband so she has complete control over her tiny family, and have Aubreigh full sized but swayed to her mother's mentality, XD Just some suggestions)



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for reading and reviewing! Yeah I think I'm going to have to go back to longer chapters because it takes me so long to write what I want to say. (Although I feel that bogs down the plot a fair amount...) But I am having fun writing Natalie's character and so I'm glad that you are loving her domineering-ness (if that's a word?). I think I can safely admit that Aurbeigh is going to get swayed to the dark side for sure. And if I can ever get back to moving the plot forward, Natalie's husbad does shrink. I think that will be a lot of fun to write!

Thanks for the suggestions and the review!

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2021 5:25 PM Title: One Tiny Night Stand

Awesome chapter! Really, really cruel cliffhanger. Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2021 12:26 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand

Holy crap well worth the wait. I hope she votes Gregg before replacing him with Ben, that way there's no evidence



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2021 2:07 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand

Curious where this goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Pluto Pendragon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2021 1:55 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand

I've really enjoyed this story so far! Natalie is certainly the star, but I also enjoy the dynamics that the other characters bring. My brain keeps getting pulled in different directions- one side wanting to just give in and root for Natalie all the way, the other side holding out hope that she might eventually get what's coming to her.

Along those lines, I thought an ironic sort of ending could be fun. Perhaps Natalie slowly breaks down Aubreigh's gentle side and turns her just as prejudiced and sadistic, only for Natalie to get the virus and shrink down, completely at the whims of the monster she helped create. Or not! I'm sure whatever you have planned will be fabulous. Take care!

-Pluto



Author's Response:

I know what you mean! I keep getting pulled in different directions as well. The writer in me wants Natalie to get whats coming (as is currently in my outline), but the fetish side of me just wants her to completely dominate and win. I actually don't know what I'm going to do yet... but I have a lot of ideas to write before I have to make a decision. Thanks for reading!

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