[Report This]Date: April 23 2021 3:47 PM Title: The Emerald Package
Starting to feel like Natalie really gets off to teasing poor defenseless tinies... Like I wouldn't even be surprised if she was actually getting WET from humiliating Gregg like that... 😅 lol
Such a hot chapter tho!!
Author's Response:
Gregg is not in for a very nice time! And yeah, Natalie enjoys herself a little too much.
Date: January 10 2021 12:58 AM Title: The Emerald Package
Really good story so far, hope you continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: January 09 2021 10:27 PM Title: The Emerald Package
This story is going great! (look at all the other thoughtful reviews if you want to see exactly how :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it.
Date: January 09 2021 4:30 PM Title: The Emerald Package
Great chapter! I think it would be really interesting to have Natalie continue to press Aubreigh into changing her views on tinies so Aubreigh ends up eventually seeing tinites as foot toys for playful interaction. Just as Aubreigh completes her conversion to Natalie's delight, Natalie shrinks and becomes Aubreigh's toy then regretting that the old Aubreigh would have taken care of her and seen her as a person.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, glad you like it! And something similar to your suggestion... but not quite... is going to happen, so I hope you like where it goes. Thank you for the comment!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 1:29 PM Title: The Emerald Package
Again, another fantastic chapter!!
I didn't realize you did a double update.
You've again done a wonderful job expanding more into this world. And I love Natalie's deal with Kelly.
Manipulating her into trying to get her daughter to change majors was perfect.
I also loved the foot content here, really well written and descriptive.
Again, it's confusing but I am loving Natalie's dominant, takes no shit attitude to the tinies.
And it's kind of realistic how she would have this view clash with her daughter's 'tiny advocacy' attitude. It mirrors real world age and generation gaps views on social issues, and in this world it makes sense.
As I said before, I normally would be on the tinies side, cheering on their fighting back of giant opression and the right to be seen as living human beings too.....but I keep veering to Natalie's side XD
I loved her interaction with the tinies, and her absolutely humiliating and subjegating Gregg under her feet and toes. How she threatened them and demoralized them and their "rights" was perfectly done and shows again that:
1) Natalie gives zero fucks about Tiny Rights, and is only barely tolerating them to the minute degree she is, due to her children. And even then when they're not around she's cutting lose with her giant-superiotity complex.
2) Tinies have no real power if humans choose not to let them have it. Their rights and jobs are really just for show or for social etiquette at best, if a human chooses to stomp a family of tinies into paste, they have no power to stop them, at least physically, and even in a legal system like this, there would be many who are still entrenched in the view of Natalie's generation, or would simply believe her if she said it was an accident, or would not look to into it. Why would they waste time and resources on tiny-killings.
If Natalie wanted to squash Gregg then and there, she could have and he could not have done a thing about it, nor could all of the tinies present. Their rights and lawful protection only holds weight if the normal sized people around the wish to abide by them, their rights are dependant on the attitude of others.
And Natalie is only playing along for the time being.
Again it's weird, but I am loving Natalie and can't wait to read more of her.
Author's Response:
Thank you. And yeah, I figured with Ch 3 not being that fetishy... it would be nice to have one that was alongside it. I'm happy you like the writing of the story so far... I try to be as descriptive as possible without ruining what things look like in other readers minds.
As for your comment... 1) Exactly! and 2) that is the interesting thing to me that I want to eplore a little further in this story, the social etiquette...the real power imbalances, and the consequences, if any. The generation gap here is where I think the tension comes from. Like, can the older or newer generation change their mentality toward things? If so, why?
I'm glad you like Natalie, she is my favorite character I've written, but I also tried to write a character I can hate. But... too bad I like characters like her!
Thank you very much for the comment and your review!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 4:27 AM Title: The Emerald Package
Tight! Yeah it's absurd, but honestly that's what I'm here for lol
Author's Response:
Thanks man!