Date: August 19 2021 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 8 Final: A CATastrophic tale
Well, it was a pretty good chapter.
Wish we got to see more of the new world Amber had created, istead of just seeing Alex still trying to reerse it.
A little sad Alex got eaten (not really a fan of vore), but guess in the end, he was a little too smart for his own good, wish Amber had made maybe used the nanobots to make him a little dumber, but gland he at least got a second chance.
Also a little disapointed we got so little Amber or that we only got a 100 ft tall cat girl action at the end, but the interaction with the daughters was more than worth it.
Really, was expecting a more of Alex got no options left, and ended as a toy/slave/lover of the gigantic cat girls, which I guess in a way it happened, just sad that the girls might not ever realize that that little mouseboy is their father.
Despite all this, I still gotta say, I was pretty satisfied with the chapter, despite everythig, loved the twist you gave it, and that open ending was so good, with him now being a newborn mouseboy, and just wish you give us a continuation of this in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the response. I could have made Alex dumber but I thought that Amber was showing him some kindness in keeping him normal in her new world. Also, I think that dumb Alex would still try to stop them. Amber's idea was to reset him to be a part of the new world.
For the girls to see him as their father, it would possibly take time. Alex could explain thing to them when he got older. For the moment, he is too young to communicate it, having to depend on them.
Sorry that the 100ft tall Catgirl came at the end. I couldn't see quite how to get them to that size without bringing the sheer dominance the catgirls had.
For story continuation, if I go down this world. I would focus more on Amber. The relationship the world would have with her. She would start to use the Nanobots and her size even more. She would make larger catgirls and we would have more interactions with them above a 100ft.
Date: August 19 2021 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 8 Final: A CATastrophic tale
Damn, it took a while for this to come out. Yeah, still massively prefer the alternative ending for the wholesomeness.
Author's Response:
Yes. This took a while. I am wanted to finish this story so I can spend more time on other projects. The time also had to do with trying to get where I wanted it to be. I also had to look at inputs. People wanted Alex to live and have a happy ending and I also wanted to have story where Amber remains a Catgirl. Alex wouldn't have it if she was. I tried to create a scenario where they could coincide.
The other storyline is for the happy ending for Alex where he restores his family but there are remaining catgirls. The two endings are the two sides of the coin. Amber wins or Alex wins but there will be catgirls forever. If I continue with happy ending for Alex, we will see more of a world where Lola lives