Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2023 8:12 AM Title: How to Train Your Brother

That's great!

Giantess and growing mothers are so hot and majestic.

I wish while brother is shrinking, the mother grows bigger and hotter instead, in this series.

Moms should be the queen of every home.

Author's Response:

giant mom stuff is coming in the next version!

Reviewer: RawAcademy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2023 7:07 AM Title: How to Train Your Dad

I feel like this is the calm before the storm. Looking forward to read what she does with her dad next.

Author's Response:

me too!

Reviewer: RawAcademy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2023 11:05 AM Title: How to Train Your Dad

This series is a favorite of mine! Appreciate the great writing and storytelling for this version as I enjoy the sped up pace compared to the first. Can't wait to read some barefeet action.

Thank you 🙏

Author's Response:

thanks, bare foot stuff coming so very soon!

Reviewer: Maryyydeimon Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2023 9:22 AM Title: How to Train Your Brother

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Author's Response:

omg i feel the same way x

Reviewer: loom Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2022 10:20 PM Title: How to Train Your Brother

can't wait til he's micro sized!

Author's Response:

i actually made a poll about this yesterday and we decided on making him 8 inches for v3 (previous plan was 15). definitely a lot smaller than now but not quite micro. i dont think i'd be able to make a long-term plot out of someone only half an inch, would only work for short stories i think

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2022 7:50 PM Title: How to Train Your Dad

Love this..... lol..under her butt...... and maybe in her bra....is he going to ever get even smaller?  And yes she seems to relish the idea of him under her feet again...LOVE IT!

Author's Response:

no he wont get smaller until a version 3 which would be a year or two away. i tend to like stories from a mini-giantess perspective rather than a few inches

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2022 2:57 PM Title: How to Train Your Dad

I almost died waiting for this chapter.  well not realli, but I am so glad to see it!

Author's Response:

feels good to publish! my july schedule isn't too busy so hoping i can push out two next month

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2022 1:08 PM Title: How to Train Your Dad

Cool update.....and a big teaser!  Can't wait for more, and I hope maybe a lil more frequent with the updates???? :)

Author's Response:

this is my favorite story to write so i want to update just as frequently as you! but life's been hectic lately. and now just when things stopped being hectic, my keyboard started having issues, so i gotta ship it out to get repaired which idk how many days that'd take but obviously cant get any work done while that's happening. but luckily i've cleared out a huge chunk of my commission queue so hopefully by june i'll be able to post at least two chapters a month again

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2022 1:06 AM Title: How to Train Your Brother

Tapped out here. Loved the story up untl this point, a great blend of realism and fantasy, obviously leaning more towards fantasy in the second phase, although that kinda only made it better. Especially the foot stuff. The under-table foot washing, Olivia keeping her brother's face covered under the couch, the mom's socks used for self-discipline. All 10/10 stuff!

Only thing that really dragged the story down for me was the cuckold-y stuff. Up until this point, it wasn't too jarring. The whole 'fucking his best friend' was much too far, imo, made worse by the fact that she recorded it for the specific sake of psychologically tormenting him. All of it felt super out-of-place and killed any interest I have in the second phase which sucks because I was loving it up until this point. Wish that part had been left for phase three and the ultra-sadistic version of Olivia where it would have felt more appropriate.

Sorry if this seems harsh, This review isn't to critique the quality of your writing, which is great so far in this story, but purely an opinion from someone who's been quietly watching this story since the start.

All the best.

Author's Response:

You haven't been quietly watching, I recognize your name! haha

Totally fair opinion to have. And there were a few other people who said the same thing, so idk, maybe it was a lesson I guess. I don't even think the final day in the story gets as crazy as this and the prior chapters were.

But yeah that's OK. I know lots of people like the story because of the more sympathetic relationship compared to most (especially for an R-rated story), so having removed that element I can see why people would be disappointed. I said this in a previous review, but I took version 1 as far as I could think to take it without ruining Olivia's character, and the same for this version. And I'm a big proponent of trying to always build on previous chapters which is why I take things slow. If I started stories off with insertion or full blown foot worship or whatever it might be from the get-go, I'd have nowhere to go but down, you know? I mean I guess that's writing 101 tho, building momentum and stuff.

Anyways yeah, I completely understand, and I appreciate the review nonetheless!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2022 7:15 PM Title: How to Train Your Dad

So glad to see the update! I almost gave up!!!

Author's Response:

thanks for sticking by!