Date: January 31 2021 12:34 AM Title: Light and Dark
This final, where we see each huma returning, reminds me that Doctor Who Christmas special about dream crabs, where we saw each of the chracters wakeing up.
Great final!
[Report This]Date: April 06 2016 4:48 PM Title: The Goddess of Merriwinter
Gonna keep it simple as I usually do: this is REALLY good.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: March 30 2016 6:17 AM Title: Poor Communication Kills Repeatedly
One of the best on the site.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: December 11 2015 8:43 AM Title: Holidays With the Pantheon: Labor Day
Silent-one, this story is wonderful. it made me so wet just thinking about it. Sexy and Cute! Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Whoa, unexpected review!
Thanks, Kaizori, I'm glad. I try . . .
Wet? You're another girl? HALLE-FUCKING-LUJAH, I TURNED ON A GIRL!
Date: November 08 2015 12:07 AM Title: Terrible Work
Wow. It's got a little punch, this story. I'm going to follow this and make a more detailed assesment once there's more to assess.
Date: October 24 2015 6:09 AM Title: The Goddess of Merriwinter
dear god this is horrifying
i guess you can take that as a compliment...
[Report This]Date: October 10 2015 10:47 AM Title: Tales of Naomi
I see... have you ever seen the film Boogie Nights? If not, you should, it's a masterpiece. Anyway, in the film, the main character is a porn star, and his sound editor, played by Phillip Seymour Hoffman, is in love with him. The limited amount of scree time this aspect and character got always made me wish for more, but this could potentially be an outlet.
Maybe you could have Lucy's thing be a subplot to another story, you know? So that you get to stretch your writing talents?
If you need some inspiration, I suggest looking up "Boogie Nights - I'm an idiot."
Author's Response:
I have been making small allusions to it, so there's that. I should probably shunt some more attention onto that detail.
I'll give it a look.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2015 9:45 PM Title: Tales of Naomi
Love these characters. It would be interesting to make a story that was a day in the life of Lucy and Ryan. You could delve into their unrequited passion for Naomi, and how no matter how much they please her, they will never get their prize. It would be interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've had fun developing these characters into people.
I had plans to do a story like that, but scrapped it, for two reasons:
1. Wasn't sure anyone would be interested- that's pretty effin' thinky, even for my work, and as Choreo tells me, this is primarily a site for fetish kicks.
2. Wasn't sure how to organize it. I only start uploading a story if I have a plan for it, and . . . yeah.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 8:39 AM Title: Tales of Naomi
I love this story so much!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Did Afroking open a floodgate or something?
[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 1:16 AM Title: Tales of Naomi
lololololol I was like why is no one reviewing? I thought their was some unspoken thing about not reviewing your stories cause you seem to be lacking in the reviews department.
but all jokes aside ive really enjoyed your Tales of Naomi and the main story as well.question:How tall is Lorelei I cant remember?
Im really looking forward to the next ch as i just realized that this story behind Lorelei was never told so next ch should be good.
ps. Im sure people enjoy your stories but seem to be to lazy to review... also srry I havent reviewed your other stories...I guess im lazy aswell.
Author's Response:
You've got me. Seriously, I was never told about any "don't review Silent-One's shit" rule, and if one exists I hereby negate it.
Thanks! Lorelei stands at 5'8" precisely.
Well, yeah . . . that's kinda why I'm telling it.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2015 12:11 AM Title: What You Deserve
I enjoyed this and absolutely loved Lorelei!
Very short but very good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you, sir (irony of a chick assuming she's surrounded by guys, hey-o).
Well, Lorelei is present in the majority of stories in the Silent Dance series, if you want to read that.
Huh. Never been told my work was short before.
Date: September 07 2015 7:38 PM Title: Holidays With the Pantheon: Labor Day
Mhm. Good.
Author's Response:
This is the shortest review ever.
So, naturally, I'm going to go overboard responding to it.
I have said that I suck at doing legit smut, but I felt I should start this because Light, Dark, and the rest of the pantheon are of my invention. Naturally, Choreographer is going to handle some holidays, and those stories are probably going to be loads better, but I just wanted to introduce the concept of this series.
That said, you thinking this is good is really a boost to my self-esteem, one I always need, so thank you.
[Report This]Date: September 07 2015 4:55 PM Title: Holidays With the Pantheon: Labor Day
I <3 Dark!! What a nice surprize this was. A fun, short, sexy read and a fun way to continue the antics of Light and Dark.
Next holiday is Halloween, when being scary and scantily-clad is par for the course. Sounds perfect for Dark but otherwise there are a lot of options.
Author's Response:
She doesn't necessarily have to mess with Light for every holiday, y'know.
Although you have given me an idea of how to handle Halloween . . .
I thought there was something between now and Halloween, though. Huh. Okay, I have more time than I thought I did.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 3:36 AM Title: Poor Communication Kills Repeatedly
I waited till 1am to read a ch of this...its now 3 and i work in the morning but i could not dare stop.
holy hell this story was amazing.I cant think of the right words atm but WOW, I can only be left wanting more.
Author's Response:
That's what you get for trying to read a Silent-One/TheChoreographer collaboration without proper preparation. XD
Thanks, though. Choreographer and I worked on this one intensely over a little over a week. Best work I've ever done, and he agrees that it was a step up for him, as well.
If you want more of our goodness, try the rest of the "Silent Dance" series!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2015 2:08 PM Title: One-Shots in Chat
Great story so far, keep it up!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2015 11:32 AM Title: One-Shots in Chat
Wow. In a good way.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 7:15 PM Title: One-Shots in Chat
Quality stuff for the ol' skinbin.
Date: August 28 2015 6:49 PM Title: One-Shots in Chat
Another collab? Okay.
This is an interesting idea. I like the fact that they can't interact with each other.
Let's see what TheChoreographer does next...
Author's Response:
We work well together.
I'm still polishing the plot for "Terrible Work", so I made this to vent the frustration.
I'm in waiting, too.
Date: August 25 2015 12:05 PM Title: Mega Lorelei
It was short, but still great. I highly enjoyed reading this and hope to see more from you in the future.
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm not going anywhere. I just got started :)
Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reviewing.
Date: August 25 2015 11:22 AM Title: The Goddess of Merriwinter
Ooh. So Miranda doesn't know about Kira's secret yet. It seems to me that Kira actually likes Miranda, but there could be a plot twist coming up.
Author's Response:
There could be indeed. Or, there could not be. Plot twist?