Date: January 09 2018 11:16 PM Title: MORE THAN A PET
really good!! are you interested in writing unaware giantess scenarios as ariana gets used to her new pet? i just really like that genre XD
keep it up
Date: January 13 2016 10:52 PM Title: REUNION
Great story! I absolutely love it.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2015 1:10 AM Title: REUNION
Pretty good I rated it 8 because it is
8/8 no b8 m8 this story is gr8
Ps. Do you like my penname
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 6:18 PM Title: REUNION
Great to see another chapter. I have always loved this world where 1/8 of the population is shrunk. Glad to see someone else use it.
I'm curious to learn about all these characters. Angel seems to be an early candidate for the villian because of how she kidnapped a little.
I'm guessing that Emma is a long time friend that Angel hangs out with. I don't know anything about her yet, but I think she trusts Angel and is important to this story.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Have no fear! Characters will be revealed later on in the story. After all, I haven't even written 1000 words yet. Kind of sad really...
Date: August 10 2015 5:55 AM Title: ONE OF THE FEW
You have a really nice set up here. Now I'm interested in how much he will shrink and how his wife will react.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm still working out the second chapter of this story and attempting to work on WHITE SMITE at the same time.
Never knew that updating multiple stories could be so hard.
It also doesn't help that I've got writer's block. D:
Date: August 07 2015 7:39 PM Title: ONE OF THE FEW
I think setting some context is always beneficial to help flesh out characters before the giantess makes an appearance. Let's see where you take this one
Author's Response: Thanks for showing interest in my story :D! Hope I please you!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 7:09 PM Title: ONE OF THE FEW
So, basically, he gets touched by Angel, every night?
Sorry! I just had to get that out of my system. So, now, I can get more serious (sort of).
I like that the opening chapter is set on a Friday evening. Because, on the off-chance that he shrinks by sunrise of Saturday morning, he and his wife basically have the whole weekend to try and figure out how it happened! And, more importantly, how to un-do it (if such is possible).
More often than not, the shrinkage in other stories occurs during the first half of the week. And, yet, for some reason, the husband is never missed by his boss, or the school doesn't call looking for the absent son, etc. etc.
So, thanks for the refreshingly different opener. And, rest assured, I will be here for chapter 2. :-)
Author's Response: Whoa. Not too sure how to respond about the touching part. :P
But in all seriousness, I wanted the whole weekend for the story to take place in, to make it seem as realistic as possible.
And thanks for not giving up reading after the first chapter. :)
Date: August 07 2015 4:05 PM Title: MORE THAN A PET
Its a good story, but the chapters are a little short for my tastes.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 2:25 PM Title: MORE THAN A PET
I'm really confused. She was a horrible bitch in the first chapter as well as halfway through the second chapter. She was horrible and callus to Nathan, her "beloved pet" in the first chapter... Maybe I'm just having trouble understanding? If you could elaborate or give me any insight at all, that would be great.
Date: August 04 2015 7:14 PM Title: MORE THAN A PET
Really liking this story so far. I'm sad about two things though.
1) I'm so into it that I get very sad once I reach the end of the chapter
2) I can't tell which kind of Giantess Ariana is going to be. Is she going to treat Nathan as a toy, or is she going to treat him like a proper person?
Loving this story so far!
- JJ
[Report This]Date: August 04 2015 7:00 PM Title: MORE THAN A PET
A spoiled giantess with a heart? I'm hooked.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2015 6:23 PM Title: MORE THAN A PET
Ok, I'm curious
[Report This]Date: May 10 2015 12:19 AM Title: REUNION
Wow, really good intro. Kinda wish it was longer, because it ended to soon. This story going to be good.
Author's Response:
Sorry if it was too short but it was meant to be an intro. Anyways, thanks for your last sentence! Really makes me feel good 'bout myself.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2015 9:07 PM Title: REUNION
Yes! I love the story "the shrunken ones" and the world that takes place is perfect for giantess stories.
i find it interesting that the perspective is from the giantess girl rather than a Little.
This girl, Angel, she seems to be very eager, and that might be a sign of cruelty. Does this mean that she will be similar to Paige from the Shrunken ones?
if yes, then will be another giantess, for example, her mom that will be the gentle and sexy giantess?
Laura was the reason why I love the shrunken ones and if you happen to write about Angel's mom in a similar way, I will be grateful.
Otherwise, this story has a lot of potential, especially since its based off a fantastic story.
I cant wait for thr next chapter!