[Report This]Date: March 22 2019 3:22 AM Title: The Huntress
Hey, relax! Don't be pissed off because of the not-five-stat ovderall rating! As someone before said, your plot is very, very well developed. Many guys here, at least currently (I'm writing this in 2019) aren't into voe and also the majority of people here are interested in quick, less chapter stories. I must be honest: I also usually like to read shorter, simple, all vore stories (even my writen ones are usually that way), but as you see, it doesn't push me away of stories like yours!
I started to read voreverse by getting 'All Nighter' to be read and, seeing that that story was sequel of many other stories, I just wanted to know how everything developed until it came to 'All Nighter'. So, I stopped reading 'All Nighter' before I did read half of the first chapter and started to read all the voreverse stories, one by one.
And man, what a good choice of mine! It's being soooo thrilling, they're among the best stories I did read so far, and Voreverse's my favorite serie hands down!
Also, as many guys said here, your plot is spectacular! I must confess: I like the vore in your stories, of course, and I'm always anticipating for the vore scenes, but what makes me keep reading your story is the plot! I want sooo bad to see what happens next to Tommy and his friedns, I want sooooooo bad to see what conspiracies are happening behind the curtains... so please keep it in your mind: you're a very talented writer, not only fr vore, but for stories at all. Your talent is for saure five-star and I'm happy that this story of yours got five-star rating too!
Keep up the good work!
PS.: although I like your stories too much, please don't again let your girl away just because you're writing... writing's good, but to be all night long with our loved ones is better ;)
[Report This]Date: March 22 2019 3:08 AM Title: Love Bite
What a great story again! I never would know that it was Bobby who's shrinking people for his cousin!
I did read people reviewing your stories and giving less starts because it "doesn't have so much vore" and all, but for me you story is very well balanced! I'm reading all the voreverse stories as if I was reading some suspense book. For a so well developed plot as this one, I guess the vore action is in the exactly right level. Well, for me those teens burp a little too much (they burp for an empty stomach, for a full tomach, when filling stomach, when talking.........), but it doesn't count as the story's so good!
Again, I can't wait to read the next stories!
[Report This]Date: March 17 2019 5:08 AM Title: Jingle Bellies
Well, well,,. so Catherine got inside Jenny's tummy... finally, she got what she deserved!
Again, you made a very thrilling story, totally enjoyable! Again, I can't ait to read the next ones and be sure I'll be reviewing them.
I don't know if ypou still write (as your story is now almost five years old), but keep up the good work if you do!
PS.: I feel so sorry for Other Bobby... so sorry! I didn't want Francine dying that way... I can completely understand if Bobby get out of the Rays Club... as Tommy and Jenny are together and it's so hard to see a friend being together with the girl who digested YOUR girl (even if it was unaware...). I'll see on the next story what Bobby does of his life without Francine.
PS².: By the way, it's now 2019. Are you and your girl together? I hope so :)
[Report This]Date: March 17 2019 4:56 AM Title: Not-So-Happy Meals
Again, Cat got herself on the winner side of the story... I hoped she would end eaten by Lexi... not that I like Lexi that much, I just don't like Catherine at all... she's deserving to be eaten!
Felt sorry for Lexi... being treated like crap by Cat and her friends all the time only to end inside Cat's stomach, being digested alive in that blonde bully! Hope Cat gets what she deserves very soon!
Anyway, great story! You're very talented in making stories go in such non-obvious endings... altough they usually don't end as I want, it adds to the thrilling feeling I feel while reading and that's way good!
PS.: yeah, but I still want Cat digesting inside someone!
[Report This]Date: March 17 2019 4:42 AM Title: Snacks
Oh, my! Again, you wrote a very good one!
But Autumn died :((... I was starting to like her.
Anyway, very goog story, can't wait to read its sequel!
PS.: so, it has always been Zack... I would never know that! I tought it would be Cat or even Lexi!
PS².: Oh my, Autumn's dead.... :((((
[Report This]Date: March 16 2019 5:07 AM Title: The Party
Wow!
Wow!
Loved that story from begining to end! As far as I can remember, I already did read this story before, and maybe some of its sequels (not completely), but now that I'm registered, I simply MUST leave a review, and thanks for such a great stoy!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2016 12:16 PM Title: Payback
this was a fun story to rread. I like male vore and this was a nice surprise. also great style and all, keep it up.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2016 7:34 AM Title: Payback
Well well well, this looks like we're headed for a really interesting finale. Really, your stories never disappoint, even the shorter ones such as this one. Eagerly awaiting the grand finale.
Author's Response:
Thanks Prodi! I'm already working on the outline for the last story, but its going to be a while still :( Don't worry when we get near the release date Ill post a comment here on this story announcing when the first chapter will be coming out, so be sure to check back here in January/February!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2016 10:47 AM Title: Payback
Awesome story, great ending, I like open endings actually a lot giving room for more. Also like m vore or m/m and f/m combinations. Great little story. Keep it going.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: November 28 2016 4:50 AM Title: Payback
I liked it at first while reading. But then sadly not that much anymore after Simon was shrunk and swallowed too, that was somehow a "killer" for me for this specific plot idea. I am a bit weird and things need to be in specific ways and follow rules of my mind, otherwise I don't like it. I would had liked it a thousand times, if Simon would have been shrunk and swallowed by Tommy, who would stayed unaware about it and even made fun in some ironic conversation about him. But having someone swallow and then shrunk too in a double shrink destroys it for me, because that literally "wipes" out the first swallow and makes it obsolet.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2016 3:28 PM Title: Payback
Good story, as always. Been enjoying your Voreverse series and looking forward to the last story, though I hope nothing bad happens to Karey. She's one of my fav characters.
Keep it up, dude!
Author's Response:
Thx 4 the review! I really appreciate it
[Report This]Date: November 27 2016 1:07 PM Title: Payback
Really liked the ending!! Don't bother me too much about what happened to Simon, he, but please never kill of Tommy :p This chapter was totally the best of them. I liked the ironic “We’ll find him,” Drake said. “I’m sure he’s out there somewhere. So’s Emma.” Keep it up, can't wait for that final story you talked about!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the ending! What did you think the male vore tho? I put that in just for you!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2016 8:13 AM Title: Payback
Awesome 2nd chapter! I love payback / unfortunate events a lot. Chapter had good length again. Really interested how it continues.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thx 4 the feedback :)
[Report This]Date: November 16 2016 5:00 AM Title: Payback
hope to see more soon. always loved your work
Author's Response:
Thanks! Nice to see you back!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2016 11:25 PM Title: Payback
Didn't know you returned here until now!
Gotta be sincere: I didn't knew you were back because without you I just don't check this page, so you can see how much I like you stories.
Also, congratulation on your new girlfriend, hope everything goes better with you two.
Author's Response:
Aw thanks. This really made my day :)
And thanks about the gf too. Were doing really good right now
Date: November 13 2016 11:02 PM Title: Payback
Glad to see you're back once again.
This story is off to an interesting start already, so I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad to see u again Prodi! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2016 12:24 PM Title: Payback
I was hoping you would return :] So happy to see a new plot to start. Still secretly hoping for more ironic twists and maybe Tommy gulping down someone without a slightest idea, or maybe in a future plot. Keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thanks zol always great to get your feedback! Who knows what the future will bring with regards to male vore, but i can promise some ironic unaware girl vore in the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2016 11:27 PM Title: All-Nighter
Oh hey, you’re back! Sorry for being late with the review. Had some health-related issues for a while so I didn’t visit the site much.
I’m really glad you’re back, though. There aren’t many vore stories as good as yours out there. As always, I’m really looking forward to the next one. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks glad to hear from you and hope you are feeling better!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 7:34 PM Title: All-Nighter
Just a 2nd 10 star rating because you deserve it. Welcome back! I see other peope have missed you too!
Author's Response:
Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 7:33 PM Title: All-Nighter
What a fantastic surprise, I never thought to see you back! You have no idea how much I missed your stories! I got your mail and just had togive you 10 stars (: I liked the ending very much. I really hope youll write more again I would love to see this epic journey to continue, maybe with new nembers to the club who would iornically get vored then. I know I always hoped for this to see some male vore especially some unaware vore by Tommy, I guess I still have to dream a little bit ^^ I am so happy to see you back!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Dont worry, Im absolutely going to write more stories in the series! The next one is going to focus on the new Rays Club but I probably wont have out until mid-Setpember at the earliest. Ill probably post it on a Saturday so just keep checking! As for male vore, Im not going to rule anything out but Ill see how the next few stories go and maybe there might be SOME vore by a male character at SOME point in the future...