Date: September 08 2021 6:54 PM Title: Penny & Returns
Oh, I hope Jun likes floating around in the sewers... gonna be doing that for a while.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2020 5:45 AM Title: Penny & Pickle
simply an amazing story. Love the family aspect and the unaware destruction of the family dynamic. That the dog name as the same magic catalyst word really sets up the characters for defeat. And the choice of the words “pickle seeds” as well as getting some of the pickle into her womb got me thinking about her getting impregnated by some daddy/pickle hybrid baby. Lol
Date: April 15 2016 2:54 AM Title: Penny & Normal Days
As much as I love seeing you write again, the fat clerk killed it for me, lol. I found it actually really gross. But that's just my personal opinion. I hope you're not mad at me saying this. And I still cross my finger you writing more again :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I wanted to try something else for a change. So a bit of a gross horror story came out. I like the horror aspect of it too. But don't worry I'm sure there will be other stories of mine you like more in the future!
EricAFreak
[Report This]Date: April 14 2016 4:43 PM Title: Penny & Normal Days
Awesome job, Eric! I loved this one!
Also, I agree. What the heck has happened to all the unaware stories? They are the best ones!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement, just ain't enough unaware content out there. Glad you liked mine!
Thanks again,
EricAFreak
Date: March 06 2016 5:42 AM Title: Penny & Pickle
First of all I would like to say that this story is an excellent come back for you!
Unaware and Object Transform are my favourite genres! So I'm glad to see one of my favourite writers back again :D
I hope that whatever is happening in your life gets better. Good luck for the future
~TheSmitty #WTUTS
Author's Response:
Life is just always busy with work, hobbies, family, and obligations etc. But hopefully I can find some more time to write. It flatters me to hear how much you care for my writing. Hopefully my next release will also be to your liking. As for Unaware Object Transformation, it seems that not a lot of writers are into it, or it's tough to write for. I will strive to keep it up though.
Thanks. EricAFreak #WTUTS
[Report This]Date: February 28 2016 11:03 PM Title: Penny & Pickle
nice, huge fan of unaware tf. hope to ee more, like you said at the end not enough authors doing this rare genre, the best genre. keep it up.
Author's Response:
Yeah it really is sad there aren't more Unaware TF writers on GTSW. Glad you liked it.
Thanks.
WTUTS!#
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 11:36 PM Title: Penny & Pickle
Ah, yes! Loved it as usual, nice to see you write again. Really good ending, I wonder what the fathers consciousness was after this, him "split" into several pieces, most of them being reduced to a soupy paste in his daughters digestive tract and becoming her poop, some of it stuck in her womb, a tiny bit of it swallowed by the dog, some juices of him soaked up by her panties. This is the hottest thrilling thought of the story in my oppinion. Great idea of the mother panically calling her daughter and its turned off. You come up with the best plots. Welcome back man.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliments, as for the status of her father, I leave that up to all the readers immagination.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 9:16 PM Title: Penny & Pickle
YOU ARE BACK! You are still out there! What a fantastic surprise :-] Yes, yes yes!! I was so sad you were gone, I thought all those Penny plots were lost. I think I have told you before but I think you are the best author on here, at least for me. Maybe it's just because I love transformation plots more than anything. But you also add so much joy to them, you are gifted, your irony, your sarcasm, the unfortunate endings. They are the best... this story WAS AMAZING. It was by far the best story of 2016 so far for me. What a fantastic, hot, thrilling idea with the pickle and the daughter using it for masturbating and then eating the remains. I am in love with this. I always loved the vore ideas the most, but also insertion, both pussy and anal. Sounds maybe weird but my favorit part of the story was then the girl used her dirty smelling panties to wipe up the mess and then put them on again, then be like smirking "there, all clearn"! Oh how ironic of her smearing her bum bacterias all over the kitchen table, her parents expenive one, I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS. But also what if some of the pickle juices the panties soaked up would contain some of her fathers self and it would now be, until her usisng the washing machsine of course, kept in hell in her girls inner ass back area of her panties. I always wished to read some plot like this. This story is just... YES. Thank you! Thank you for coming back!! I hope so much you will write again more oftenly, you just have to! I would love seeing a sequel to your club series too, with some unaware micro/nano anal vore again. Ah I am in heaven right now reading your story again :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reveiw. Yeah my life is busy, but hopefully I should get some more time to write. Look forward to it.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2015 3:01 AM Title: Penny & Normal Days
Youre back!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhh!!! I didnt think youd write again, what a damn fantastic surprise :'/ <3 <3 <3 <3 Hope youre mood will stay, please, it just has to :p Youre still under my top 5 authors, you just have to write again now. Really great start, as in the past. Youre just the best of unaware tf. Im not sure of what youve already planed out, but I would love see an unaware underpants tf, toiler paper sheet or some tiny food tf of course are just the best. One of the most unhumiliating tf ideas I ever wished to read about was a tf of an unfortunate boy into another boys underpants because what could be even more horrific for a guy. I really liked of this chapter of how the bad luck already started to happen again :-) Please keep up writing!! It's so awesome youre back <3 <3 Ims ure lots of other will see it the same, your Penny stories were always the best.
Author's Response:
Well I didn't think I'd ever really quit writing, my life has just gotten far busier. I really just took a break, wanted to be more inspired. I got a new truck now, a motorcycle plus license, more over-time at work. Friends have been around more lately. I bought and am in the middle of putting up a greenhouse, etc. I still wish some other authors might contribute their own penny stories. It feels sad sometimes being one of the only authors to be writing TF horror stories. And thanks again for the support.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2015 2:08 AM Title: Penny & Normal Days
Great stuff and welcome back.
Author's Response:
Thanks AdamX. Honestly though, I was always lurking, like I had in the past, but being a contributers is fun and tough at the same time.
Date: September 07 2014 6:01 PM Title: Penny & Souls Lost
I really hope youre still out there and continue this story (and finish it too sooner or later). I miss your Penny stories so much :'( Hope youre ok.
Author's Response:
I am still out there, just busy. This story had a plot written out etc and I have plans to eventually continue it if I get the time too. I will always be writing for fun and for improving my writing skills. Enjoy my new penny story if you want, Penny & Pickle.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2014 5:20 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
That was a really good unaware story! I am always a fan of unaware, and the transformation aspect added even more to it! Good job!
Author's Response:
Glad to see that new readers of my older stories are still being enjoyed. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 3:39 AM Title: Penny & Souls Lost
I really hope to see an update soon again, I miss your work here so much :/ Not really a fan of the last chapter, but just because I dont really like pigs haha :x Still the plot seems great so far and I hope to see some plot with a horse vore resulting in becoming manure a day later. But also I would love to see some tf again in "abusing" her friend in eating something tiny like a M&M or using something horrible, like a toilet paper or an anal bread for example, like a kinky gift from Cassie to her friend which would be used sooner or later.
Author's Response:
Yeah I keep getting distracted and getting writers block. I'll write more as I get the time and the idea's to write. This story is not finished.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2014 7:42 PM Title: Penny & Souls Lost
Awesome to see this back.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support. I will try and keep chapters coming as I get the time to write them.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2014 7:37 PM Title: Penny & Souls Lost
So damn glad youre writing at this story here again :') It's my favorite and I wish so much it will get continued. I missed reading on it over the last couple of weeks so much :( I wished you had wrote out on this part a little bit more "The few remaining contents of the bag spread onto the floor where some young boys were sitting....When she sat back down she watched as the boys grabbed up the chocolates. "What a waste."", I really liked that idea that Joel maybe got a one way ticker through one of these younger boys digestive tract. Even though you mentioned earlier in the story that Joel was one of the first M&Ms she ate that day. Hope so much youll have time really soon again now to continue :)
Author's Response:
I'll try and right more when I can. I'm glad you like the subtle tone I used. as for Joel, that's a mystery. She could have ended up in anyone's stomach who ate the M&M's. All I said for certain was that she was gone, and most likely through Susan, or so hoped Cassie.
Anyways, thanks for the review, look forward to more when I can get some more time!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2014 5:58 PM Title: Penny & Souls Lost
Good to see it back.
Author's Response:
Thanks AdamX.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2013 6:44 PM Title: Penny & Souls Lost
I hope so much youll be able to continue on your story here really soon again :') I miss it so so much. I wish you a happy new year. Have a nice new years eve night!!!
Author's Response:
Hopefully free time will come up to write, now that the busiest part of the year at my workplace is coming to an end. I'll still be busy but hopefully more writing time can be alloted.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2013 9:54 PM Title: Penny & Thankful
Good story. One small typo
Picking up the penny she looked at the panicking turkey before her. "There was never a Turkey named Penny!" She laughed.
Dont u mean turkey named Lucky?
Author's Response:
I can't believe I missed that. I should try to avoid fast writing and editing. Hope you will forgive me.
It's fixed now, thanks for the heads up!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2013 6:30 PM Title: Penny & Thankful
No :'( Why wouldnt you be able to continue the penny story any more in the near future. Thats a horrible news :( I really hope you still will be able somehow. Thanks a lot for this special short story!! Wish you a Happy Thanksgiving too :']
Author's Response:
I've got real life commitments for the next week, and virtually no time to write. Also I still want to get out one more chapter of another story before doing another chapter for Penny & Souls Lost. That's why there will be a delay. I had some free time today when I could have spent it with my family to write this story. So I hope for now it will satisfy you and all the other Penny fans.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2013 7:49 PM Title: Penny & Souls Lost
Cassie has the makings of a future giantess sociopath. She's on the right path it would seem.
Author's Response:
I'm glad someone has noticed. Cassie is a bit of a sociopath, as your clearly starting to notice. She started all innocent, but she is gradually revealing he true self to the readers. Coming up eventually you will be able to see more of why she ended up that way, but that flashback scene is for a future chapter, I hope you will still be around to review it when I do.
Thanks again for the review, hope to see you next chapter.
As for Cassie's personality, there is a few truths we can take from it. She really does love her best friend Susan. She is very manipulative. She's a compulsory liar. She blends into society perfectly while still being able to stump out of the life of another simply for getting in between her and Susan. She has her own rules on what makes a human, human, and if you don't measure up, she will heartlessly step on you. It's not for pleasure, nor is it for a greater purpose, she simply labels certain people worthless bugs of society. A perfect target for Dexter Morgan, wink, wink.