Date: January 04 2016 3:22 PM Title: Scapegoat
Please don't leave this story this way! It has so much promise... What you have completed is sufficient for the first chapter, only. There should (and really must) be more. Please reconsider.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2011 7:06 PM Title: Scapegoat
good story and you managed to sneak Nazis in it.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2010 10:47 AM Title: Scapegoat
Hi, there! I know I probably reviewed this story, way back when, @ Giantess City. But, I wanted to reacquaint myself with the central characters before perusing the sequel co-written by Pixis.
And, that is where I'm off to next. Tally ho!
Date: September 17 2008 3:05 PM Title: Scapegoat
Dude! O.o wow...man, it's just...wow. you can't stop there. i feel so sorry for Raquel. Damn, thtat's some bad luck.
Author's Response: Don't worry, a sequel is coming soon.
Date: August 07 2008 2:00 AM Title: Scapegoat
No there was nothing wrong with that, but it was a bit sad for the son to be killed and for the bad guy to get away.
Author's Response: The reason for that downbeat ending was that it was sort of response to the rather violent ending of Pixis's "Rowena 2". It had quiet an impact on me and I wanted to have ending that had the same kind of impact. Weather I succeed at that is up to the readers.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2008 12:27 AM Title: Scapegoat
A very good story but a very sad ending.
Author's Response: There's nothing wrong with that right?