Date: December 15 2020 6:02 PM Title: The Plea
LOL
I tought the first chapter was the final one, as the self-proclaimed innocent man was squished, but it was not him!
Let's see if she has some feelings or is cold at all
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted the first chapter to seem like it was the whole story, based on the description. But it actually was only part 1/2 of the prologue! Thank you for reading.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 12:44 PM Title: The Plea
Well I'm hooked!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! Thank you for reading.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 7:18 AM Title: The Coworker
of course looking forward whats to come thx for the update!
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 3:33 AM Title: The Plea
enjoyed this a lot I really like dark ironic unfair plots hope to see more
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. As a matter of fact, I just uploaded the second chapter, so I hope you will enjoy it as well!
-Pluto
Date: December 14 2020 11:51 PM Title: The Plea
This was wuite intresting id love to eee more maybe get her with someone whos actually inocent
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! There's definitely more to come. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 14 2020 3:42 PM Title: The Plea
I absolutely love this story idea. I would love to see more chapters in this genre, ,all innocent, and then having girls be the executonor, in different ways maybe shrinking them very small to ant size, butt insertion, death by taking a shit on them, oral vore, fed to a dog, burned alive, so many ways. I love this story idea!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for my first review! I'm so glad that you like the story idea. It definitely lends itself to all sorts of scenarios. I hope you'll continue to read!
-Pluto