Now this definitely an interesting turn of events. I hope this doesn't awaken anything in Allison. I'm wondering what this ten minute session will result in, and whether Cathy is going to want to end it after such a short time. Also, I wonder how Brian is going to hold up. Usually if a tiny dies because their body isn't tough enough to handle what's happening, it's probably a "too bad so sad" kind of thing where the Chevalier is annoyed that they didn't last a whole session but it's no big deal. In this case, Allison has to try and ensure that he survives without giving away that she cares about him. I guess I'll find out what's going to happen in the next chapter. Thus far the story has surprised me in a good way.

Why are psychology majors always so damn unstable? That's just a fact. Not all of them, but a fair bunch. More than half at any rate, and Allison ist no exception. I find her terribly annoying. She thinks she's smart, but she really isn't. Like she thinks the files might have been tempered with to make the convicts appear to be lying. Unless their world was completely Orwellian (which would explain the extreme number of executions) there would be ways to find the truth of that on the internet. I'm starting to think she was selected for Chevallier on account of wholly different reasons than she thinks. Maybe she was taught by Dunning and Kruger as well?

I'm Team Cathy, all the way. I'd love a Cathy chapter, although this teasing and hinting at what she does during her SPAR sessions is probably better to keep her magic going. She's absolutely amazing and well-written, like Brian, erotic without being pronographic. That's a rare breed.

Still hooked, thank you so much for updating so frequently!

I've been folllowing this story with interest since you publlished it (sorry for not reviewing....)

But you have done a fantastic job worldbuilding here. 

I also love how you worked up to this amazing cliffhanger, establishing how Cathy thinks of their accused tinies, and what she would do in this situation.

It really left me wanting more. 

I saw another reviewer say Alisson should just knock her out, and I kinda thought that too. 

I can see this leading to an argument, and mayube Brian being hurt by Cathy in said argument.

But at the same time, I'm hoping Allison might be able to convince Cathy of her perspective and that Brian is innocent. (But I don't know where you plan to go with this, and am excited to see more)

I will hopefully be able to review more. 

Like I thought, nobody taking the reigns, both parties being selfless, leads to doom. Living simply is simply too hard like that. That's the way humans function and you've fleshed that out pretty damn well without mentioning it outright. Show, don't tell. That fight was so real that it was hard to read as someone who has married. Went right to the marrow, that one. Outstanding work.

Now, any number of things can happen from here. You already know them. What I would like to see is Allison standing up for herself in a calm, calculated way. Otherwise, she's trapped. I mean, Brian might be absolutely correct. But you don't give up a job like that. It's like talking to civil servants about their massively unfair wages and benefits at the expense of everyone else. They might even whole-heartedly agree with you, but none will ever quit or refuse to take the money. Trust me, I've been there. Unfortunately for Brian, he has few other things to think about in his time. And he won't back down. Such is his nature, plus this isn't about the misallocation of tax money but human lives and dignity.

Putting myself in the shoes of the executed and comparing that to the way Allison thinks when she's not on the job makes me smile every time. I think about this story a lot, actually. Can't say that about many stories.

Part of me wants Allison to go full retard and ask Cathy for advice. That would be hillarious. Although, given the state of mind in which Allie is driving to work today and the expectations Cathy undoubtedly harbours towards Allison's methods of execution, there's bound to be something coming up anyway. And of course, the customers of Allison's terminatory service will proclaim themselves innocent again. Perhaps one of them doesn't lie about his (or her?) crime this time. Perhaps he or she lays out believably how it was all just one big mistake, or else how they truly and honestly regret what they did. That would be bound to make poor, big Allison all dizzy, wouldn't it?

Stories like this shape up like a tree diagramm. At any point, usually, there are multiple choices to pursue. I've found that picking one and sticking with it is really important, otherwise you end up writing a very confusing book. Like I did.

From here, Allie could take more people home in hopes, in part, of making Brian's life easier. But that will lead to only more intriguing problems. Or she resigns herself, which would eventually bring the story to an earlier close and enable you to pursue your next idea.

I've truly no idea what is about to happen, only feeble wishes. That's half of what writing stories is all about, though. You got me well and truly hooked into this thing. Can't wait for your next addition. I'm sorry for the lengthy comment, I just like this story so much. Cheers.

I'm honestly in love with this story. This chapter managed to give me some "12 angry men" vibes. My heart is still pumping! It's pretty difficult to make me this invested in just any piece of literature, but this is some incredible dialogue writing. I love the moral debate between Allison and Brian, it somehow manages to be somewhat compelling for both sides and is exhilarating as hell. The debate made me feel somewhat similarly to how the arguement scene in marriage story made me feel. I can only hope that the characters get to reconciliate and bond further once they have some time to reflect. All in all, I'm thrilled to see what happens next! Well written works of fiction like this are what I live for (fan service should always come last Imo). Keep it up!

Don't be surprised I'm leaving many reviews,

it's because I find this story very intriguing and it is giving me a lot of conjectures :)

Maybe I'll be inspired to do some drawings out of these chapters, who knows

I can see them slowly sliding into something they can no longer control. And Brian may just be shaping up to be a hell of a character. I'm stuck wondering how much of him is act and how much of it is real. Three days isn't a long time and he might be still overcome with gratitude. But that will wear off. Problems will arise, conflicts of interest, mishaps, all those sorts of things. Between the both of them bending over backwards to accomodate each other that is bound to end up in some clash. They can't stay on that bloody couch forever. Brian can't, anyway. He's not that kind of guy.

Another fantastic chapter. Funny, I was reading your response to my last review when all of a sudden this one dropped. I'm liking her current goal of getting him flustered. I see her doing some sexual teasing with him, perhaps at some point even a perverted hide and seek. I just don't buy his asexuality. Seems like a front he puts up to keep from getting hurt.

At this point I wonder what would have happened if it was Cathy in chapter 3 instead of Allie. Would have she believed his innocence? If yes, would have she done the same?

But then, I'm not even sure if this man in really innocent. Sure, the way they treated his case is already a proof of innocense, but what if we readers (and Allie) are just being played by his evil mind?

I like a lot this story, I want to know if in the future we will see maybe more giantess content? Keep writing this story pls :D