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Reviewer: Undersquid Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2021 1:46 AM Title: Guest Inside My House

What a great story! I kept thinking back on what inspired it, and recollected bits and pieces of it in your writing.

Rosemary is a character after my very own heart. Everything she does is right as rain, as the narrator must come to understand one day. For his own good.

I like the cadence you keep with your storytelling. There is a deadpan, natural glow retired from nervous energy, yet you manage a wonderful buildup with all manner of undercurrents. One of which could be terror, in some readers.

In me it’s delight in what I see, and agreement with a fate that does not include regrowth, and one that redefines freedom. Excellent writing, my friend!

Reviewer: Nemo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2020 11:20 PM Title: Guest Inside My House

Thanks, johnsmith.  Good to see people from the old days.  I do mostly vanilla writing these days but like to stretch once in while.  Take care

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Date: December 10 2020 12:00 AM Title: Guest Inside My House

Wow, what a treat to read a new story of yours. I'm a big fan dating back about 17 years or so when I first discovered the internet world of this fetish. Thanks for your contribution and I hope you continue to do what you're obviously skilled at and have a passion for.

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