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Reviewer: Zoroark3496 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2020 7:44 AM Title: Update, Hiatus and Bonus Apology Story

Its alright man. Its the holidays. People are busy. I appreciate the bonus though. Hope to see it get continued.

 

If the problem is writers block, I have a few suggestions for some scenes to get the juices flowing -

  • The sister bumping around a lot since she's still growing and hitting a lot of things.
  • The mom finds the rose water and now we've got three tall, buxom ladies.
  • Julia has some growth spurts at tables and such and hits her knees, breaks chairs, etc.
  • Sara shows off her strength some.
  • Some bits about stuff shaking either in the house because Julia is so big or their mother grows a lot and doesn't realize how heavy she is or Sara walking down the street. Or all three.
  • Julia not realizing her tits are so massive and just smacking the hell out of someone on accident by turning too fast.
  • Some sex stuff. 'Cause.
And of course if all else fails, I wouldn't think anyone would be upset by some stuff on Alison or her daughter from Triple NNN... or some growth scenes with Sara while she was offscreen.

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2020 11:36 PM Title: Update, Hiatus and Bonus Apology Story

Wow, this is soooo gooood!

Reviewer: Zoroark3496 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2020 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Dish Best Served Huge

OK so first, love the sister taking the serum. Hope she doesn't go into the hundreds of feet. That was my cutoff for Triple NNN, at the end when Max wound up so huge. I like them below 15ft most of the time but 20+ can be good.

Will we see the mom take the remainder of the perfume? An 8ft mom running a household would be great.

And when Julia crashed through the doorway, did she go clear through the wall or fall down? I'm a little unsure on that. Either way is great.

I hope you can still do Friday's release this week, but if you feel like you need to start making this Tuesday's only, I understand.

Any thoughts percolating yet for Alison Smalls from NNN?



Author's Response:

I don't wanna spoil things but no one's gonna end up anywhere near as big as in NNN. I imagined Julia just busting through the top of the door frame and taking it with her. 

 

As for Alison, I have two other projects in the works at the time of writing so I really can't say. 

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2020 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 3: A New Outlook

Fantastic story!

Reviewer: Zoroark3496 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2020 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3: A New Outlook

Sarah better watch out for doorframes. They don't like people approaching 7ft tall. Though if she's getting stronger too, she might not care and just put her head through the frame.

Hope to see someone else get the serum soon. Will there be any futa in this story, or just tall girls with huge boobs? Both are great.



Author's Response:

I'll prolly just be sticking to tall girls with huge boobs for this one, not sure how I'd intergrate futas with this setup. 

Reviewer: Ulbabrab132 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2020 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Step.

Nice start, I loved the second chapter and characters interactions! 

Reviewer: Zoroark3496 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2020 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 2: Old Bonds

I enjoy that its gonna take another day or so for people to really notice that Sara is growing. Hope we get to see someone else get the serum too. The mom or the sister perhaps for some "this wasn't supposed to happen!" antics?

The rat genuinely shocked me with speaking. Is this serum going to make Sara smarter as well?

And could the other story be more content with Alison from Project NNN? I really enjoyed her stuff in the story and would love for more content to come out for her.



Author's Response:

There's definitly gonna be some shenanigins, you can't just release a serum like this and expect it to remain contained ;) 

As for Alison, I'm really glad that you enjoyed the charachter so much, though I don't know when I'll be doing anything related to Project NNN again. I have this story that I'm gonna try and update twice a week, and then two other indipendant stories that are in the works so my plate's a little full. But I will definitly keep your sugestion's in mind for the future! 

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