[Report This]Date: November 24 2020 7:20 AM Title: Home From College
Great story so far. I didn't expect the antagonists to be transphobic but that makes sense. My favorite part so far was when the girls were spitting on him, which unfortunately was glossed over pretty quickly, but still well done.
I very.much hope for some more non-feet related stuff soon.
But you're a good enough writer that you've made me hate his family, so I hope for some sort of revenge at the end. Maybe he does something simple like just getting a gun and shooting them, then he goes to jail for murder where more fun can happen in a sequel story.
Anyways, thanks for the content!
Author's Response:
I'll be sure to consider delving from feet more. It's my top fetish, so I naturally come back to it. Thank you for the kind words!
Date: November 21 2020 11:04 PM Title: Home From College
Haven't read all chapters yet, but it seems like a fun story and well written.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: November 21 2020 4:54 PM Title: Over, and Over, and Over
After reading your other story, I'll admit it was surprising that he tried to escape...
I also thought he was going to have extra punishment for the effort it would tkae mommy to get him back, but luckily that was not the case (unless... the way he tried to escape, does he think she's stupid?)
"he bit her lip in excitement" - some typos are priceless!
TBH I'm not fond of sissification, but if it leads to you writing more chapters, go on!
Author's Response:
His escape was out of desperation. Maybe he doesn't think his mother is stupid, but he underestimates her capabilities.
And I wasn't fond of sissification at first either at first. Now, it's the only option of clothing I have!
Date: November 17 2020 5:41 PM Title: Mother's Assistant
Random points because I should just quote every sentence and add a random compliment afterwards...
"punished, not starved" => generous like the original Karen :D
I was thinking he should have pointed out it's his first day, ask them to cut him a little slack while he's still learning and maybe ask mommy to teach him how to do xyz... until I got to her actual teaching and wow!
Now I'm waiting to see when (and why?) the terms of his punishment get extended; and btw, a random good idea worth mentioning, the family vote in "circumstantial execution".
PS
Big thanks to Heather for demanding this story!!!
Author's Response:
Heather is happy you enjoy it. My time with her has been tough but rewarding.
Date: November 17 2020 5:32 PM Title: Sister's Experiments
If you haven't already, you should watch shrunken schoolgirl spy with Lola Lynn - it's the best "spend the night in my shoe" video ever.
Author's Response:
I'll be sure to see if Heather approves of me watching it!