Although the setup was interesting, I didn't really enjoy this one at all. Tons of vulgar dialogue, the constant descriptions about dried sweat, bile, and smell of urine was disconcerting. The mother's reactions is described way too often, very repetititive (40 different ways to basically say the same thing) and boring. The forced incest and eating a girl right after she was in another's ass were just gross.

I've read several of your better efforts. This was not one of them. But perhaps that was what the commissioner requested, so who knows.