[Report This]Date: November 10 2020 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 4b: The Last Lesson - Artoria's View
Loved this short story. The naughty teacher using a powerless student is always a great recipe for some prime giantess moments. I thought the shrinking as he fails each lesson was crafty and having each chapter be their POV was a nice touch.
One other thing I have to say is that dialogue takes up most of this story, and it would be neat to see some more 'descriptions' of what was exactly going on.
All in all, awesome story.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review. I will try to describe more of what is going on the epilogue. I want readers to imagine the world this is taking place in. Thank you for the criticism.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2020 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3b: Second Lesson- Artoria's view
Love the story. I like how Artoria keeps teasing John with hope. I hope he gets smaller. I wonder what she will do if he does.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the response.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2020 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 3b: Second Lesson- Artoria's view
This story has been pretty great. I dont think John has a chance in this last trial for his detention. If he fails I hope Artoria decides to just keep shrinking him, maybe take him back with her. Drop him down the back of her thong and leave him in her ass while she leaves detention. Just an idea, looking forward to what ends up happening :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. It will be a really hard trial for John. Artoria is really sexy and big. I hope that you will enjoy what happens.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2020 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 2b: First Lesson- Artoria's view
Wow, I just read all 4 chapters and this story is amazing!
Artoria is creative and I love how she treats John.
Also, I love how naughty and horny she is. I'm so excited for her to put John in her panties. If she does put him there, I would love to see her keep him there for a long time. I know she said it was forbidden or soemthing, but I think that would be sexy for her.
The 2 views of each character is interesting. Usually I don't notice much of a difference, but I do enjoy reading about what goes on in the teacher's mind.
John is one lucky student. I wish I was him.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I like the situation when a charater find themself in sticky situation but are enjoying it. I also like when the big one is in charge and has horny thoughts as well.