Reviewer: Hershrunkenplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2020 1:15 AM Title: Taking a Dip

Fantastically written. One of my favorite stories I have read recently. I love the concept of being shrunk by one who is normally smaller than you. Very well executed. Your detail work is great. 

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, there's something extra enticing about the pred being smaller to start with. This was the result of an art-trade with Xiao Renzhe (https://www.giantessworld.net/viewuser.php?uid=30651) so it's based off a concept from him. I really enjoyed writing it.

Reviewer: DrTritium Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2020 8:32 PM Title: Taking a Dip

You're back! It's great to have another story from you. I'm trying to think what it is that is so remarkable about your stories. I think it's that your stories are lewd but also romantic and whimsical. The romance plays up the submission and connection that sits below the outward expression of the fetish. It's a neat interplay. I also like how you played with folklore - in a way that provided enough context without being over the top with exposition. Really well done. 

Author's Response:

You're feedback is much appreciated! I was worried the intro was a litle too long, but I hate piling into the fetish scenes too fast. It seems though it paid off :D You've pretty much summed up what I aim for in most of my writing. I'm going to be writing some more hopefully... you know... without the year plus gap :D