Date: October 01 2020 8:28 PM Title: Backwashed
Hello! Is there anyway to do a spin on this story and instead of being washed down with the coffee she's instead stepped on or ends up in the Karen's shoe?? man this story was amazing! 10/10!! Maybe a sequel?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! And I sort of have an aversion to foot stuff, but it's not really off the table in the future!
Date: September 30 2020 4:40 AM Title: Backwashed
This is an instant Fav. This is just the type of story I have been wanting to read for a while, when it comes to unaware vore. I hate Karen's but the premise of the the girl who you think will have her vengeance having the tables turned on her is amazing, especially.since.it makes me feel more bad for her adding more gravity to the situation. I especially love that it is unaware. I have not read your stories before, but I will look our for them for now on.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words!
Date: September 26 2020 9:34 PM Title: Backwashed
The poor girl dealing with school, a dead end job, and a family tragedy gets digested by the bitchy, most likely rich and privileged Karen. That's dark. I fucking love it. She probably wouldn't have done any differently had she been aware of her. The only thing I would change or more accurately add would be a scat scene at the end. You write those so well. But either way it's perfect.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading my work!! I appreciate the comment!
Date: September 26 2020 4:21 AM Title: Backwashed
Wow. This made me feel so bad for the main character. I have seen a lot of Karen's on youtube and I for one would want to see them shrink away to nothing. But to have it backfire and you getting shrunken and consumed would be a nightmare.
Author's Response:
Yes! I revel in the darkness!
Date: September 25 2020 10:00 PM Title: Backwashed
Great short story!
Author's Response:
Thank you shaman!!!
Date: September 25 2020 7:30 PM Title: Backwashed
Fantastic story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Da Boss!