I would love to see more of what happens at the strip club. Still my fav story on here. Keep up the great work. 

honestly, it's hot, but I kinda want the dad to get some payback for all this BS, maybe Ashley becomes the tiny pet-girlfriend of Kloe and they together exact revenge on her family and Paulina somehow

Are you going to continue the story?

I have a feeling the mom never forgot the remote. Plus, she wanted to have a bit of fun at her daughters expense. (Not realizing how her actions affected her daughter)

I'm enjoying the story and hope you update soon.

Yes! happy to see new chapters. Keep up the great work. 

I think you have a great world built here. It would be cool to have spin-offs of the stripclub. Have both positive and negative experiences with the other girls on other nights that the place is open. 

Either way this has been my Fav story this year, cant wait to see more. Keep up the great work!

Ashley can't catch a break :( 


Though another great written chapter, but yeah wish she could have some time to herself.

Nicely written content though here :)

(but still wish her parents became aware XD) 

Oh wow!!!

Yes!! Finally someone knows the truth.

Loved the sexy giant interaction with Derek here, and that someone in the family finally knows the truth.

I'd say screw it, tell their parent's (though I've made my opinion on this known in other reviews) I feel it need to happen, even if in an alternate ending/alternate chapter.

Just having that horrified realization, which you know could not be healed, no ammount of apologies or acts of forgiveness would work after her parents had used her so horrible for their own pleasure, and almost killed her.


Anyway! I loved this chapter, so sexy and hot. 

Can't wait to see where this goes (though I have my hopes XD)

Loving these alternate endings/takes. 

They're fun to see and explore all the possible scenarios. 

But I still am hoping for one where she's found out to be their daughter, and having to face the consequences (be it legal/police wise, as it's not like she can just dissapear without anyone noticing)

Sandman579 brought up some great points in their review:
I wonder if Paulina cleaned up the records enough that when Ashley gets reported missing by her own parents, the police can't trace her activity back to the club. She can apparently kill security guards on a whim for cutting her under the table. If Ashley does somehow get raced back to her club can she just brush it off like anyone could've kidnapped her? Ray's exchange with Ashely at the club suggests he didn't connect the dots awhile back during dinner, but if police tell him and his wife the club was the last place Ashley was seen it might suddenly click for him. I'm interested to see if her parents do eventually realize what they've done and if she's still alive when the truth is revealed what will happen? Will Ashley get rescued and restored by authorities and her parents arrested but leaving her a broken shell? Will they feel guilt about what they've done to their only child and try humanize her again and salvage her mental state? Or, will they just go full hedonism and justify themselves by saying she isn't human any more and just a toy and keep tormenting her or killing her out of shame or guilt?

(Sorry to them for copying their review. Just trying to show their opinions on possible scenarios)

But yeah, it would be great to see some alternate takes on if they found out the tiny stripper was their daughter, maybe a few different takes on the reveal/consequences. 

Anyway, back to this chapter, it was fantastic as always loving seeing these and can't wait to see where it goes nexy. 

Great ending chapter.  I did not expect the mom to appear.  Like how she handled it.  Loved how ashley was traumatized and her family was unaware.  I think her being swallowed would have been funny too.  I was waiting as i read it to see how it would play out.  Almost missed the final chapter if it wasn't for you laser pen story.  Can't wait to read more of yor stories.