Date: November 14 2020 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Honestly...I want to see Ashley's dad learn about the whole thing but not to enslave her. I want to see it played straight-all the horror, despair and guilt that it'd imply.
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Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2020 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love how nasty it got in that final chapter, dad giving his daughter PTSD with an idle fart, fantastic.
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Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 11 2020 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Usually I'm not much into M/f but this was great! Loved all of the humlliation that was added by her dad and how it was written!
But my favorite parts definetily were the F/f sections due to my personal preferences. Her mom's attitude was great! And would've loved to see more from Rosita too haha Looking forward to future projects from you!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Currently working on my next project right now!
[Report This]Date: November 11 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story!
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Thank you!
Date: November 07 2020 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh damn, this definitly deserved that NSFW Tag.
Nicely written and a great follow up to the cliffhanger that was last chapter.
I still am hoping he finds out what he did to her when he sobers up, and realizes "oh shit, that was my daughter" or is confronted.
Paulina is definitely shifty, Ashley should consider seeking alternate employment.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the positive feedback!
Date: November 05 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yo Really Nice story so far!! I also like the subtle hints you've put in about how Paulina may let him have her if he has enough money, how she's greedy, and how small she'd make Ashley if it ever happened. Good job and I hope to see the story completed!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the whole story!
Date: November 05 2020 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ohhh wow things went south fast for Ashley.
I really hope her dad is confronted by her when he sobers up over this, just to see the look on his face and the fact his drunken ass forced himself on his shrunken daughter.
With that being said, I can't wait to read more :D
[Report This]Date: September 29 2020 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to read more.
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Thanks! I hope you enjoyed it!
Date: September 29 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ohhh shit XD
Can't wait to read more.
I was happy to see this story return after so long, and this cliffhanger has me excited for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2020 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great starter chapter. I always love the premise of shrinkies going missing but it could never happen to me. Funny what good amounts of money will make people do. Loving the drunk Dad and Daughter stripper combo about to happen. Really looking forward to more of this story.