Reviewer: DigestedAlive Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2021 5:00 AM Title: Hot Tub with Extra Cream

Very good stuff. Thank you very much for writing it!

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 6:43 PM Title: Bright Pink Nails, Bright Red Tampon

Overall this story has some interesting and descriptive gore scenes.  And despite errors in the earlier chapters, which i commented on already, I'm interested to see how it will finally end.

 

 I always wonder with stories that have an automatic return to normal size feature what it would be like if, after someone was crushed or mangle but still living, suddenly bloody bodies appeared when time ran out.  I just think it would be hilarious to see the unaware killers reactions.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 5:51 PM Title: Refreshments and Pest Control

Ok.  I'm commenting on the second chapter.  I enjoyed the first chapter but the second was a complete mess.  According the the writer the chapter was written by someone else and then edited by them.  Their are a number of incosistencies.  The daughter is swimming instead of walking on the water.  They all of a sudden have radios instead of cell phones.  The others, who didn't know where the kids went, all of sudden know katie was swallowed and want to rescue her.  Then they talk about meeting up with carl, but don't know he was crushed under the giant foot, even though the giant voices were talking about crushing a bug and supposeldy all insects have been cleared from the home.  I really hope the rest of the chapters are more consistent and as well written as the first.