Date: September 20 2020 2:35 AM Title: Natural Order
Damn, I knew the humans were going to lose. On devianart you mentioned that the Elsiran Empire was a magitek Roman Empire, I can see. The Romans used to march and humiliate worthy enemies like they did with Rickard.
Any chance of the elves ever getting comuppance?
And I also wanted to ask, are you going to finish If,Than?
Author's Response:
Closest equivilent is a magitek Roman Empire yep! The poor dear, tried so very hard. War is a cruel thing truly.
In stories that I write, very very very unlikely. They might have moments of stumbling but the point of the setting is in the name really. Humanity's Downfall.
I don't know, probably not? I tend to write whatever I have the spark of inspiration for at the time.
Date: September 19 2020 6:07 PM Title: Misdirection
It's a shame humanity doesn't have a balancing factor in the war. If this is a sequel to the rest of the Humanity's Downfall series it seems like this is humanity's last stand. A dedicated mage circle or a divinly choosen skilled human mage could've dragged this out or leveled the field. The god's have turned a blind eye to this pitiable world if the balance can be skewed so strongly to a cruel race, beyond revenge and into madness and depravity.
Author's Response:
A very unfair conflict to be certain, just a case of being vastly outclassed by a superior enemy in every way. Also, one might say either the gods don't care or are fine with it. I wouldn't call it a sequel, just another thing happening in the world.
Date: September 19 2020 2:24 AM Title: Exchange of Blows
So Prince Rickard just outplayed General Nalista and is now attacking Elsiran territory, nice. Though I get the feeling he's still going to lose in the end because the name of the story is Subjugation and you tend to do dark stories.
Author's Response:
Certainly a possibility, suppose we shall see!
[Report This]Date: September 18 2020 12:11 AM Title: The Prince
I like this prince, this prince doesn't deserve the stuff that's probably going to befall him or her. I haven't read much of your work before, this one I will. Fare thee well, most noble and puissant prince. D:
Author's Response:
I'm sure only good things will happen to him. Totally. What could possibly happen that would be bad? Everyone knows the protagonist always wins.
Date: September 17 2020 4:15 PM Title: The Prince
Alright. Glad to see another story in the Humanity's Downfall universe. Looking forward to seeing more. By the way, I don't know if you remember, but a few years ago on devianart we discussed some possible stories in the setting. Do you think anything could come of them?
Author's Response:
Yes this one will be a bit different from my others from years back. Some evolutions in my tastes. Should still be the same lewd universe however.
I did actually search back through my DA logs and believe I found the ideas you were talking about. Won't happen in this story here, but one of them might potentially work. Obviously no promises there as I'm generally a write what I'm in the mood for kind of writer.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2020 1:54 PM Title: Misdirection
These stories are always an emotional roller coaster. The hotness of being commodified by beautiful elves contrasted with the reality of how cruel and unfair the whole thing actually is.
Love this story as with your others. I think I found a typo:
The Zweihander elite infantry that Albar was feared for among its neighbors.
Either the "for" isn't supposed to be there or they're feared for something that is absent.
Aside from that small hiccup, love the story, and love having some elves get theirs, even if we know how it ends.
Author's Response:
That is the struggle isn't it? On the one hand, hyper lewd big elf dominance. On the other hand, the sheer unfair despair of it all. Its a lovely mixed feeling and if you enjoy that I think you'll rather enjoy this one.
Also, thanks for pointing that out! Completely missed it on my read back through.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2020 9:53 PM Title: Misdirection
Another wonderful entrty, thank you! A promising first chapter that has me curious and eager to read more. Excited to see what you have lined up!
-Jess
Author's Response:
Should be a good time I hope! I certainly enjoyed writing it, a good return to the setting hopefully.