Date: December 05 2020 6:40 PM Title: Destruction
I love your stories so much. Especially with the elves. Another fantastic story. I would love to know how the war got started and how elves got magic. Have you seen the dragon prince on Netflix? Great show with humans and elf's at war. Your story reminds me of that if the elf's won.
Author's Response:
Why thank you! Happy to hear you enjoyed! The story that comes after this, Rulership, has some of that lore you are curious about. Though fair warning that story is pretty much Mxf. Also I can't say I've seen it but will add it to the watch list!
[Report This]Date: September 25 2020 10:54 AM Title: Destruction
This has been an absolutely wonderful story from start to finish. The characters were ineresting and engaging, they had meaningful arcs, the world building was lovely and it led to a wonderful end. Truly fantastic!
-Jess
Author's Response:
Why thank you! It was lovely to write, hope the next one is also engaging.
Date: September 23 2020 8:17 PM Title: Destruction
Just finished this story and dang, this is a pretty interesting world you have here. personally i'm less fond of the psychological bits but the whole "beautiful elves who are better than humans in every way reduce humans to a tiny animal species' is pretty hot. Their shrunken victims might think "the elves are so pretty and perfect, how can they do these terrible things?" Even when being eaten they might admire the elf's mouth before they get gulped.
I'd like to see the Empress and her thoughts on all this and any royal family members too. Perhaps there could be a duality too? Like elves who treasure and love their pets but act cruel to other humans sort of thing.
I quite liked "Loving Arms' because it showed that not every elf is cruel or indifferent but even the nice ones maintain a position of superority over humans. I look forward to the sequal!
Author's Response:
Happy you enjoyed! Pleased you find the concept as lewd as I do as well, giant elves is certainly one of the tops for me. Hopefully whenever I finish the sequel you find yourself enjoying that was well!
Date: September 23 2020 3:48 PM Title: Destruction
So not only is this an absolute masterclass in writing and conflict development as well as world-building, but it's also extremely solid size smut with character interactions that feel real and poignant. To the end I still couldn't decide whether I wanted Rickard to keep hold of his humanity or just submit and be Nalista's personal toy forever.
You continue to be one of the best writers in this fetish and if you had a ko-fi site or something I would easily make donations or do whatever I could to help you keep sharing your stories with us!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll take that as a compliment since a lot of the time people just want the small to submit and give it all up for the smut! Always nice I think to have people behind the size.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2020 11:30 AM Title: Destruction
Really enjoyed the story and the characters. I'm lacking time for a full review, but I loved this story.
Author's Response:
Not a problem, happy to hear you enjoyed the story!
Date: September 23 2020 1:07 AM Title: Retaliation
holy shit what did he do?
You finished the story so fast, I wasn't anticipating that I would get to read the one whole thing in one go!
Author's Response:
I had the story pretty much finished when I started posting. Was mostly just ironing out the draft and posting them as I did. Ensures I don't post anymore incomplete stories like I used to do.
Hope you enjoy/enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2020 12:08 AM Title: Misdirection
Well... My limited knowledge of english may not be enough to express my thoughts, but i will try anyway.
It's probably the first time the story on this site left me with such... conflicted feelings. And your worldbuilding... Really... At some point i even caught myself thinking "I want to live in this world! I want to dedicate my whole being into stopping the elven onslaught by all means necessary! And see for myself if this humanity, myself included, is fit for survival or doomed to brought under heel. Yeah, that would've been a real trial of skill and wit..."
Not your usual thoughts after reading a story on giantessworld, huh?
Well, anyway, i'm happy we're getting a sequel. I'm really excited to see if prince will find that "lifelong paradise in servitude after crossing the waves of despair" Nalista was talking about. There's saying "Once you're at the very bottom, the only way you can move is up". Rickard did everyting in his power and was ready to give up his life for Albar, let's see if he'll devote himself for his new mistress with same resolve...
And speaking about Nalista... I may be mistaken, but... I think she cares for her "Black Rose" more than she will admit, at least for now. (Of course! An exalted hero of Elsira cant have any feelings towards a lesser being! Yeah, sure...) In that bedroom scene when Dalia almost swallow Rickard, among other things like arousal and annoyance, Nalista felt fear. What was that? Fear of losing her new toy? Or fear of loosing something more? I really hope the sequel will have this moment covered.
I think that's it for now! And once again, thank you for bringing us this piece of art.
Author's Response:
I think I got the general gist of it! I sorta want to make my worlds feel detailed and real enough for people to either get invested in or at the very least give them a good picture. How I've built out worlds has developed over the years. So there is a clear line between the stories I first wrote in the setting and this one I think. Hopefully an improved one! That worldbuilding sometimes generates some powerful feelings of defiance evidently!
I'm really happy you enjoyed reading through the story!
[Report This]Date: September 22 2020 10:53 PM Title: Destruction
A very well written story and - what I find more important - a really good story. The fetish inserts were probably my least favourite parts of it, seemed unnecessary on more than one occasion. The main characters were amazing though, and their interactions perfect.
I do not like to review the plots of the stories I read or comment them (as they belong to their respective Authors and Authors alone), though I am willing to make an exception here. The ending made me feel quite sad; it seems Rickard truly loved Nalista, maybe more than anyone ever did before him, but Nalista, being a product of a society she was, failed to recognize it and brought him to the verge of insanity (though whether he crossed the threshold remains uncertain). Tragic tale set in a world of full of animosities and strife, but one that makes me miss the characters already.
Author's Response:
Very happy to hear you enjoyed it! It was quite fun to write! I try to approach things from a story angle first, the world being what it is allows me to insert size as being basically just a way of life here. I try to make it a seamless blend but sometimes doesn't work out so well.
Its a tragic thing really. The two of them probably could have been great friends and even more, if they weren't in the world they live in. Their dynamic was fun to write honestly and I'm happy to hear you took some feelings away from it, even if it was sad.
Date: September 22 2020 9:06 PM Title: Destruction
It was then that Rose won the battle against himself. He loved Nalista.
Author's Response:
What a long fought battle, but he came around in the end. To the true way.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2020 9:03 PM Title: Destruction
One of my favorite stories on this website!
(story spoilers ahead)
With this, the final chapter, I think Nalista is accurate in her statement that it's something that has been put in motion. Even if the empress isn't that personally pissed off about it, she has to give the elves a show of strength to reassure them that they aren't going to be sacked by the next campaign.
Of course, people don't usually respond to shows of force like this by giving up, so future humans will probably do their best to resist all the same.
What really set this apart from some of your other stories for me was the plentiful backstories for both Nalista and Rickard. Even if my primary motivation for reading was smug elf feet, it's always better with characters who feel real, as opposed to just being afterthoughts (though I apprecited the random side characters too.)
Author's Response:
I enjoyed writing both of them as well! They had some lovely back and forth to write and honestly I just wanted to touch on the conflicts that happen in the world as opposed to looking strictly in the elven heartlands. Hopefully the story I'm writing after will live up to the same!
Date: September 22 2020 7:22 PM Title: Identity
“I was in Ostreach, you fucker.” She growled. She lifted up her right arm and indeed there was a false hand of silver upon it. “I screamed and asked for mercy, I never tormented my humans or nothing. Then you cut off my hand.” --
Pssh, i only watched my companions torture, kill, and devour humans civilians in the city. I didn't personally commit these crimes. Stop apologizing princeling, she doesn't deserve one. Look at her now, abusing a defenseless you. Weak willpower on that one. I wonder what the maiming did to the healer mage? Humbled or indignant rage?
Author's Response:
Indeed, bit of a hollow argument there that she's morally clean fighting when, ya know, fighting for an army like that haha. Fortunately, bigger = argument better than the smaller. Or has more weight anyway, pun intended.
Date: September 21 2020 1:24 PM Title: Misdirection
loving the story but i have one question. are the elves only amazon height but shrink the humans? im kinda confused.
Author's Response:
Correct, the shortest elf is usually around 6 feet tall while their taller specimens are 8-9 feet tall on average. Humans are all shrunken when captured by the Empire.
Date: September 20 2020 10:10 PM Title: Trophy
My favorite part of this story, by far (and there are a LOT of favorite parts don't get me wrong) is that subtle understanding that in a weird roundabout way, its almost like Nastalia is slowly coming to see Rickard's own personship, in that she takes an insane amount of pleasure out of grinding it into nothingness in between long conversations about politics and philosophy. It's a weird mirror of how Rickard's slowly losing his own sense of personship, it's like they're slowly blending into each other's perspectives. Honestly I kinda hope that by the end of the story even after Ro- erm, Rickard's lost everything they maintain that uneasy dynamic.
Author's Response:
Nice save there at the end! There is certainly a focus on how far one can fall and how much pleasure the act can bring the one to have defeated him. Yet at the same time Nalista does indeed enjoy her exchanges with him. Just clearly enjoys breaking him like a twig a bit more. Anyway, glad you are enjoying!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2020 7:29 PM Title: Trophy
Oh i just love the way she sees through him!
Btw, after reading their conversation i suddenly remembered elves of Elnead cheering not the name of Empress but Nalista's.... And once the war is over, influential person like her may be deemed dangereous and find herself as the target of numerous political intrigues... "Once the fighting is over, the best heroes in politician's eyes are the dead ones"
Author's Response:
Politics are a dangerous thing indeed, who can say how many daggers are pointed at her rather lovely back once there are no longer any wars to fight?
Date: September 20 2020 3:57 PM Title: Deflowering
"if you think this has a happy ending then you haven't been paying attention"
I see you watched Game of Thrones. Come to think of it, Dalia does kind of reminds me of Ramsey Bolton, vicious, sadistic, enjoys tormenting people and breaking them.
Author's Response:
I have indeed, always rather liked how sinister that line was. Also, its a good thing Nalista isn't Roose Bolton then!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2020 8:33 AM Title: Natural Order
Oh my, what a pleasant read! A rare treat endeed! I rarely leave reviews but... Your way of writing the New world order stuff is truly great! No matter if we're talking about this story or the other ones.
And... Gotta say i understand and partially agree with the elven PoV about the whole "lesser species" idea. Humans were doomed right from the start. Since the very moment the elves established their own empire and started conquering nearby countries.
Why? Because of humaninty's greed and stupidity of course!
Instead of fighting over a pieces of land here or there and holding grudges against each other, they should've combined the strength of all kingdoms. Rally an army of 100000 and show the elves what's "The wrath of humanity" is all about.
Politically wise, creating such an alliance while facing common enemy wasn't too hard. Invading Elsira from the different sides wasn't too hard either, but they failed to do so. They fought alone and fell one by one instead.
When the elves gained foothold other continents, humans failed to drive them back, or at least cut the sea supply paths. What were the fleets doing?
And now for the main question: after all this decades (or perhaps even centuries) of war... WHY TH F*CK are they still trying to face FAR bigger and stronger opponents in melee combat instead of shifting their focus to magic, ranged weapons and war machinery? Do they need an english longbowman back from 1346 to show them how it's done?
So... The humans can't be pitied. They brought this upon themselves and will eventually suffer for their ignorance...
Well... That's enough about the humanity, let's get back to the story.
I love the power dynamics here and sincerely hope Dalia won't be able to "correct" prince. At least not without breaking the Grand Generals orders.
Let's see if our little prince will do well enough to be personally trained by Nalista. His resistance may even pique her interest further... She had her breath taken by him not long ago, she deserves the best pet, and the "Black rose" deserves the best mistress! After she breaks him in of course...
P.S. I'm truly sorry about my poor english... It's not my native language after all...
Author's Response:
Hey, not a problem at all! Happy you are enjoying the story. There are humans like Rickard that do try to adapt but its rather a case of too little too late at this point! Such a terrible pity.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2020 2:42 AM Title: Natural Order
This chapter is my favorite kind of thing to be honest. Prestigious, beautiful women having tiny people serve their feet in dominant, casual, strict, but gentle (relative to how cruel size content can get) ways.
It's still mixed with the unfairness of the situation, and of course, being stuck in it for life would be hell. If only it could be like, a summer program...
Anyways, great chapter! Being used as a sandal strap is criminally underutilized!
Author's Response:
Its a delight to be sure! I'm a sucker for scenes where the smug ladies just prop their feet up and the implicit command is basically there. Very delightful stuff.
A nice vacation destination but not so much where one is gonna set up a house, I can totally get that.
Date: September 20 2020 2:35 AM Title: Natural Order
Damn, I knew the humans were going to lose. On devianart you mentioned that the Elsiran Empire was a magitek Roman Empire, I can see. The Romans used to march and humiliate worthy enemies like they did with Rickard.
Any chance of the elves ever getting comuppance?
And I also wanted to ask, are you going to finish If,Than?
Author's Response:
Closest equivilent is a magitek Roman Empire yep! The poor dear, tried so very hard. War is a cruel thing truly.
In stories that I write, very very very unlikely. They might have moments of stumbling but the point of the setting is in the name really. Humanity's Downfall.
I don't know, probably not? I tend to write whatever I have the spark of inspiration for at the time.
Date: September 19 2020 6:07 PM Title: Misdirection
It's a shame humanity doesn't have a balancing factor in the war. If this is a sequel to the rest of the Humanity's Downfall series it seems like this is humanity's last stand. A dedicated mage circle or a divinly choosen skilled human mage could've dragged this out or leveled the field. The god's have turned a blind eye to this pitiable world if the balance can be skewed so strongly to a cruel race, beyond revenge and into madness and depravity.
Author's Response:
A very unfair conflict to be certain, just a case of being vastly outclassed by a superior enemy in every way. Also, one might say either the gods don't care or are fine with it. I wouldn't call it a sequel, just another thing happening in the world.
Date: September 19 2020 2:24 AM Title: Exchange of Blows
So Prince Rickard just outplayed General Nalista and is now attacking Elsiran territory, nice. Though I get the feeling he's still going to lose in the end because the name of the story is Subjugation and you tend to do dark stories.
Author's Response:
Certainly a possibility, suppose we shall see!