[Report This]Date: September 12 2020 5:51 AM Title: Cottage Confection
This one is a nice idea! It teaches a valuable lesson of not getting between a girl and her chocolate. I really like the feeling of futility in this story.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
Or, perhaps, between a girl's chocolate.
And thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2020 3:42 AM Title: Cottage Confection
They go through a lot of tinies... I know the police investigated once, and it didn't turn out well for them, but you'd think there'd be private investigations, paranormal tv shows, urban myths, stakeouts, surveilance, etc eventually.
Author's Response:
Maybe time for someone to try to infiltrate? Something for the next batch of Gammas to deal with.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2020 3:06 PM Title: Cottage Confection
As usual, your writing is always very neat and easy to follow, which I actually hold above seeing my favorite sorts of situations or tags being explored, so I just wanted to express my appreciation for your consistent care and attention to detail. Your writing paints a very effective play-by-play in my head with very few gaps that really enables effective imaginary immersion. It often delivers the same, easily consumable experience that just lets me enjoy the ride in a similar way to a comic.
I enjoyed the man's inability to determine the entire time whether she couldn't hear him, or just didn't care. I also enjoy that she never "broke character," and so he'll never know!
You're an extremely prolific writer on here with quite the impressive library. But I think this is my first time reviewing your work, so I'd like to say, I am blown away by the endless idea-factory that is your mind, and your constant ability to actually coax those ideas to take shape on the page.
Excellent vore short. Thanks for being a writer!
Author's Response:
Thank you! My general philosophy with writing size fiction is keeping it quick and getting right to the action to give something people can enjoy in just a few minutes. It helps that for work I often have to write step-by-step instructions or summaries for people who want or need to see every detail, and I think that comes through here. I want to put people in the shoes of the protagonist and experience everything they do, with the full gamut of senses whenever possible.
You're welcome, and thanks for finally reviewing! If you feel up to it, you should go review some (or all!) of my other stories.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2020 8:31 AM Title: Cottage Confection
Great story, lovely descriptions, interesting scenario. The only reason I'm not giving it full marks is because it is marked as unaware, everything was set up as though it was unaware, and then that last paragraph reveal that she knew the whole time, this was a pretty normal thing for her, and wasn't actually unaware really turned me off. It casts a new world order or cruel giantess context over the story that kind of made me feel tricked. I know unaware isnt everyone's cup of tea, but as someone who loves unaware vore more than nearly any other genre, and getting really excited about you (who I've followed quietly for years) doing more of this, only to have that reveal was pretty disappointing. There are so few authors who write focused unaware (not the kind where there's two paragraphs of unaware in a 20 chapter story buried in an obscure paragraph in chapter 13), and so few more who write it well, like yourself, that it just twists the knife a little more.
I know I just spent way too long complaining about something that is such a miniscule (no pun intended) part of the story, but I do love your work and have notifications turned on for when you post, so as a fan of yours, I couldn't help but mention this because it, for me, is the only red ink on an otherwise perfect unaware vore story. I'm hoping you do more like this, or really just more vore period. Thanks for all of your contributions to this community, and I hope I to you'll keep writing for us.
Author's Response:
The story has the Unaware tag because it has strong unaware elements. Jackie never acknowledges him, there's no interaction, and he fails to get her attention no matter how hard he tries. It is, for all intents and purposes, an unaware story. Unaware is already a gray area as it is: is a story unaware if someone's merely acting unaware, or if they mistake the smaller person for something else, or if they actively shrink someone then lose track of them? You could make a convincing argument either way, however I err on the side of inclusivity in these issues, because, even as you admit, it scratches the same itch. It definitely doesn't fit as a new world order thing, since the Gammas do not determine social norms, and what they do is still forbidden, though they're good at deflecting consequences.