You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2020 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well this was a succinct and exquisitely written tale of epic terror. You put so much time love and care into carefully crafting your playthings only to destroy them in a flash of brilliance that's awesome to behold! I enjoyed Antonio's thoughts and feelings with regard to the slaughter till the bitter end. Bravo! 

Also, thanks for that list in response to my earlier review. I'll be sure to check those out. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I was absolutely one of those people to finish making a big fancy Lego or building block construction and then have some monster knock it all down. Makes the end more impactful I find if there is some context for why its impactful. Hope you enjoy the other stuff as well!

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.