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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2024 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I also have a question about Lucas.   I assume he had his nanobots removed in the lab (the ones that Brooke had made him swallow in her saliva at the end of the restaurant scene).   So he isn't shrinking anymore when he cums.   However why didn't he get his height back, the same way that Brooke lost her height when she had her nanobots removed?


Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2024 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 29

Also I am super hoping that Brooke at some point will grow way beyond 18 foot tall.   I love the idea of her being a real giantess.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2024 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 29

I just read through all of the 29 chapters, as I was hooked.   You might be able to tell from my moniker how much I love breasts, but I love the giantesses behind them too.   I found the last chapter very interesting as the new device, obviously created by Brooke, allows Lucas to turn settings up or down.   She must have liked Lucas more than I thought to allow him to turn any setting down.  Given that their relationship has been turning into more of a real relationship now, and not just Lucas being horny for Brooke, I am getting a lot more invested in the story.    Maybe Brooke predicted he would fall in love with her, and vice-versa when she made the device.   I am super wondering if smart 300 Brooke still loves him.  By the way, I am a 136! lol.  I hope that love transcends IQ barriers.

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2024 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 28

Very nice, let moms getting bigger and hotter please, giant Milfs are so amazing

Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2023 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

This was so incredible hot! Gonna head to your patreon now to read more. I know there will probably a dark twist, but I really love the sweet mommy like Brooke



Author's Response:

Hey Stehlampe, thanks so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story! <3 

Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2023 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

So, so good. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for saying so, Stehlampe! <3 

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2023 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story but I wish there were some growing moms and milfs in here.



Author's Response:

Well, the story is going to be 99 chapters in the end, so I'm sure we'll have something like that in there eventually ;) 

Glad you like the story <3 

Reviewer: pixawave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2021 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is AMAZING! One of my favorite stories from one of my favorite authors. I'm very excited for the rest. The build up has been great, but I am enjoying that we're starting to get some more action. Thank you Joyce :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, pixawave!  Lol I don't know why I'm just seeing your comment now, 2 years later, but I really appreciate it! <3 

Reviewer: Marussia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Looking forward to seeing what she does to Lucas. Great work!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2020 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

Just a silly little thing - "Sofia" vs "Sophia" (I searched for "Sofia" because I didn't remember which one she was, and I got no results because all occurrences in previous chapters have "ph" instead of "f")

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Not sure how my brain decides between stalking authors with comments or being radio silent while I read, but let me tell you (since somehow I only commented here a few seconds ago :) that this story is absolutely fenomenal!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

I confess my ignorance about electronics; computers could be mechanical or hydraulical for all I care, as long as they run my programs.

And btw, not many people know that Ada Lovelace also apparently (but not certainly) invented another construct that we programmers use a lot, the typo - https://twobithistory.org/2018/08/18/ada-lovelace-note-g.html :)

Reviewer: Elbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2020 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great story by a great writer!

Rare that we have the pleasure of such an accomplished writer creating such fantastical fetish fiction! Definitely checking out your patreo, Jocelyn...and thank you for sharing your dreams!

 

-Elbee



Author's Response:

Hi Elbee!  Thanks so much for your kind response!  I'm happy that I can write stories that you enjoy!  <3 <3 

Reviewer: Firestone Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

is this story gonna have size content? if it's up to chapter 15, maybe post enough that it's actually size fetish



Author's Response:

Haha, ohhhh yes -- this story will have PLENTY of size content.  You could join my Patreon and see, but otherwise you're just gonna have to wait ;) 

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, CW! <3 <3 

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