[Report This]Date: September 20 2020 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
The more I read off this, the more I want to read more of it.
I can sense Harper as a potential ally but much too early to tell.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2020 11:37 PM Title: The Beginning
I'm dying to see the story continue, please don't stop. Can't wait to read chapter 4.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2020 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is seriously amazing. Chapter 3 took it to new heights, I'm so excited for where this is going, thank you for writing it~!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2020 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy hell, you've crafted a masterpiece here.
You really feel for Annabelle in her strife and the four girls are perfect antagonists in this fetish.
Date: September 06 2020 4:44 AM Title: The Beginning
I love it so far but there's a bunch of weird spots where the words and dialogue become weird scribbles like "x335;x688,x376" for some reason
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know! I think I got them all, but when I copied and pasted my story from another word document, it turned all my italicized words into some weird code. I had to manually go back and type it into this site's word document.
I'm glad you're liking the story!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2020 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to read more
Date: September 01 2020 5:56 AM Title: The Beginning
Lots of promise shown so far, really excited to see where the story goes. Great work!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2020 3:31 AM Title: The Beginning
Incredible start and delicious trickery by our hosts.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2020 2:25 AM Title: The Beginning
ok but like... after reading the summary then the story, where's the logic in that? (other than a crush and vore fetish?) they wouldn't have to fight if they could just rein it in for ten seconds and realize there are more than enough shrinkees to go around.