Reviews For P B D
Reviewer: jujubee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2008 9:29 PM Title: D B D DDD B
Date: June 21 2008 9:29 PM Title: D B D DDD B
Awesome ideas and very well written! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2008 4:51 AM Title: D B D DDD B
Date: June 10 2008 4:51 AM Title: D B D DDD B
Okay, yet another yarn that took a time to get to the gist - girl-power, ability to shrink things as well as humans. A good scenario, the scene being Africa. A pity Carla and her spiritual friend were not black. That would make a change. May I point out two spelling errors? First, you keep writing "feint" whereas it should be "faint" and the second is "breath" as apposed to "breathe"
The former, 'breath' pronounced breth, a noun, is to take a breath. Breathe is the verb...to breathe.
Anyway (NOT 'anyways') it will be interesting to read the 3rd part, and let's hope whoever is shrunk is not too tiny.