



[Report This]Date: February 07 2026 10:48 PM Title: Harley's Arrival
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic.
Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level!
Feel free to reach out to me via Discord aeroo_draws Hope to hear from you soon



[Report This]Date: August 23 2020 12:04 AM Title: Harley's Arrival
It's a pretty nice strarter! Had no idea you were into these characters. I love the buildup towards Ivy coming with her, and the sheer variety in Harley's modes of ruling! The writer captures the tone of voice and the villainesses' chaotic motives really well.
That said, I feel like Ivy's a bit underused. While I guess the base for this Harley is the recent cartoon version, I found myself having trouble picturing some scenes without descriptions of her general attire and appearance. (Doesn't help that Harley's look changes so often.) And to add to that, there aren't many descriptions of the tiny people or their way of life, pre- or post- Harley. I know it'd be clunky to implement these details with so many interactions, though.
So yeah, all that to say: the sequel should keep up with the good pacing and characterization, and also have a long sequence describing the tiny people's proudest cultural monuments, before Queen Ivy wraps them in her vines and stuffs them into Queen Harley's clothes. :P




[Report This]Date: August 22 2020 1:39 AM Title: Harley's Arrival
I'm a simple man, I see giant Harley/Ivy and I upvote.
Author's Response:
Ay! It was my idea. Feel free to comment down other thoughts you may have.