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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2020 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Tara's Feet.

I really liked this chapter. The pacing is good. I like how she users her powers until she doesn't need them anymore to make her do it on her own. I eagerly await what comes next!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2020 8:26 PM Title: Prologue

Need to read more! Try and have chapters longer than 500 words. You have a nice foundation for the story let's see where you take it!



Author's Response:

Thank You for the review! I realized as I was writing the prologue that I'm not good at meeting word minimums lol. I'm working on it.

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