[Report This]Date: August 11 2020 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
As someone who know little about the show, and who isn't the hugest fan of Eda's design, this does a nice job within the constraints. There's enough creativity and individual sights within each world, balanced out by the giant gal's kinda sweet innocence. Feels really accessible, and even interactions I'm personally not excited by seem so offhand in the bigger narrative that it doesn't distract from the rest of it. And for the interactions I like - all the better, it makes the planets' fates feel that much more hopeless.
Nice overall!
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[Report This]Date: August 09 2020 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Would've imagined Luz (The main human girl and main character) being the unaware one, but whatever. Great work regardles.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the praise! Feel free to give more feedback in another comment or in a direct message. I know almost nothing of the owl house as one of the editors was more knowledgeable and added the details. Also it was a commission and if you have the money, I could totally see the original commissioner approving a sequel about Luz with more planets.