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Reviewer: Laah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2020 5:05 PM Title: Tele-Pods

This was indeed a very interesting adaptation of that already great vore pic! Not only you managed to develop an exciting story around a single picture, but you made it in a such great way, this was a pleasing read from top to bottom! Also, I liked the way you write, I can just wonder if someday I'll get experienced enough to write like this ^-^

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words! ^.^

 

You writing is good already, too, and it gets even better with practice as you start to develop your own personal flavor of stories. :)

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