[Report This]Date: April 26 2025 10:44 PM Title: No Case Too Big & No Clue Too Small
Your stories are always so damn good! I loved the worldbuilding in this one and the mystery too along with all the characters! Very good work!!! Hope to see other stories with these two detectives!
[Report This]Date: April 13 2025 4:30 AM Title: The Flea Market
Excellent chapter! Love this world you're building.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Melanie and I were meticulous when crafting the MG-verse. This story is just a spinoff, go check out Magna Gratia if you're craving more!
[Report This]Date: April 13 2025 4:30 AM Title: The Flea Market
Excellent chapter! Love this world you're building.
Author's Response:
<3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: April 12 2025 6:20 PM Title: The Flea Market
Great chapter! I was wondering when we would see Jeaninne again! I'm loving this Magna Gratia spin-off.
Author's Response:
It was inevitable! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: April 12 2025 9:48 AM Title: The Flea Market
What is simply weird is that physics don't apply to minis. Take the falling guy. At this size, no fall, no matter how high, would kill them. Ever dropped an ant? They just move on. There's simply not enough weight to make them gain enough inertia. If there are insects and smaller animals in this world then their rules would have to apply to beings of their size.
Author's Response:
The physics can be a little confusing sometimes. Usually we write as though each person is like a normal human and is affected by forces in the same way, no matter their size. Things like the surface tension of a water droplet or the density of bone make anything involving extreme size difference very unrealistic, so more often than not we ask the readers to suspend their disbelief.
For this specific example though, it isn't the fall that kills that character. It's more likely the wind blowing them at speeds far greater than terminal velocity into something. Think fly hitting the windshield of a moving vehicle; yes it's small but it'll still go splat. We try to avoid going into that level of detail in the story since it can be heavy handed, but I am happy to elaborate for you here in the reviews. Hope that makes sense!
[Report This]Date: March 19 2025 4:48 PM Title: The Flea Market
Great work. I love to see massive size differences but I like there to be interaction between sizes. You're knocking it out of the park in that regard. I'm tempted to go and read the whole Magna Gracia series now. Keep up the good work! I'm excited to see what's next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! If you do read MG, let me know what you think of it. Plenty more to come, stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: February 25 2025 2:53 PM Title: The Flea Market
That's some sick casual cruelty and gaslighting from the scientist. It makes sense the Brobs would use lili slave labor instead of using tiny robots since they're technologically backwards compared to the other races.
I have a feeling the lilis would continue to be picked off until Emily and her husband are left.
I do have a minor nitpick, though. When the Brob was spraying them down with water in the first chapter, I assume the nozzle shot out microscopic water droplets because I feel like regular water droplets would be like giant boulders to lilis.
Author's Response:
This story has no shortage of cruelty, in several flavors. I tried to avoid cruelty for cruelty's sake like we too often see in other stories, though. Most of this serves a purpose on some level. That doesn't excuse it, of course.
It was a normal bottle, so the droplets were very large. The reason no one got crushed under any of them was due to the spread of the nozzle.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2025 11:22 PM Title: Magna Gratia
This is probably my favorite story on this site!
I love the characters and the plot. Love the character development.
Different from the norm of smut stories and angry/ cruel giantess. Definitely more into gentle giantess!
GTS33 and Melanie have great pride in this story! This is an awesome story. I find myself wanting more!
This story has inspired me to write. I will give it my best and hope that it is anywhere near as good as this story.
I hope y'all have a wonderful day and know that you have made my week as I read Magna Gratia.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, Matt!
This story means a ton to Melanie and I. We are very proud of it and appreciate all the love it gets from readers like yourself. I hope to read what you write sometime!
Have a great day :)
[Report This]Date: July 18 2024 12:42 PM Title: Magna Gratia: Side Story
Jannine indirectly saved another lilly life!
Author's Response:
Indeed!
Date: July 16 2024 5:58 PM Title: No Case Too Big & No Clue Too Small
Gosh, can those two just stop flirting and make out already? Such drama queens...
Jokes aside, another great chapter in an amazing story made by Geno. Really love how well you portray the tension in the dialogue.
Author's Response:
Never!
Thanks, Mel! Couldn't have done it without you :D
[Report This]Date: July 14 2024 9:40 AM Title: Magna Gratia: Side Story
Very good story, as usual!
Author's Response:
Thanks, fleant!
[Report This]Date: July 10 2024 3:06 PM Title: No Case Too Big & No Clue Too Small
Nice work, as always!
I was wondering when you were going back to writing after finishing Magna Gratia. Glad to see your writing got even better!
I wonder if Flint and Claire will ever become fond of each other?
Anyways, I'll patiently await for the next chapters of this mistery.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, I needed a break after completing such a long project. I like to think I'm always improving!
I can't comment on that, keep reading to find out :) I hope you'll enjoy the story. It's set to be 7 chapters (6.5 actually since the 7th is short)
Date: July 09 2024 7:50 AM Title: Magna Gratia: Side Story
I loved this alternate story to the original, it's wonderful, please don't let it die, continue it. I hope the teacher and the character become friends. As a suggestion, maybe he should leave her a written thank you when she's not there yet, with the threat of what he's going to do to her if she finds him. They communicate through written messages, like a game of chess. He writes to her and looks at her from somewhere and she answers him. It would be epic. I love the world you built, it's beautiful.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Sadly, it's just a one-shot. I did it as a commission for a friend and do not have any intention of continuing it. That said, I hope to write more stories in the world of MG! I hope you'll enjoy them as much as this one
[Report This]Date: May 08 2024 11:13 PM Title: Magna Gratia
This is the best size-related story I ever read!
You're very good in writing and in making very good characters living their life.
I loved the ending and I totally agree with Jannine in the epilogue. :)
Date: April 11 2024 6:05 AM Title: Magna Gratia
Good book
Enjoy read
Date: March 13 2024 10:18 PM Title: Magna Gratia
2 years a lot of work but this story if finally done. One of the best things I've ever read on this website and wonderfully well done. The creators were all nice listening and reading reviews from readers but the story is fantastic. You usually never get a gentle giantess story especially one that it's complete. If you like that sort of stuff I totally recommend this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad we could make our mark within this sub-genre!
Date: March 06 2024 10:21 AM Title: Magna Gratia
It's Melanie once again! Figured that with the story coming to an end it was about time. I sincerely hope everyone enjoyed what we accomplished with Magna Gratia, because I certainly did! It has been a huge honor and a ton of fun to help make this story what it is today for almost one and a half years now. Of course, I'll continue helping out with any bonus chapters and future stories as well, I can't wait to show them off to everyone else. Make sure to check out all the other "short" stories we wrote if you haven't yet, they're all amazing as well, and it'll help bridge the wait for the next big story. And finally, thanks to everyone who left a review on the stories, they really mean a lot to us! ^-^
Author's Response:
Thanks a ton, Mel <3 I couldn't ask for a better coauthor than you.
Here's hoping that you'll (((someday))) write and upload your own story!
[Report This]Date: March 01 2024 11:15 AM Title: Magna Gratia
The kiss between Jeannine and Nick was unexpected, I'm actually not sure if it implied more than it was but it was still surprising to see since it was always Sara that flirted with him.
Enjoyed this story from beginning to end, sad to see it go but maybe there's hope for a new story or side stories that show how they're all doing in the future, and how all the new tinies are faring. Amazing story and I look forward to whatever's next :)
Author's Response:
It was meant to be platonic--a spontaneous moment of affection after such an intense series of events--but I can see how you would think that. Just to be clear, Jeannine and Nick are just friends. The best of friends, but nothing more.
I'm also a little sad to end it, but it needed to be done. Better than to keep going and ruin what I had! I will inevitably revisit this eventually, maybe even sooner than you think? Look forward to the bonus chapters :)
I will continue to write and upload, that isn't changing. I hope you'll enjoy our new projects!
Date: December 28 2023 9:34 AM Title: Magna Gratia
This one was really really cute and sweet. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you! <3
Author's Response:
Thanks, Wholia! It was really enjoyable to write. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 6:40 PM Title: Magna Gratia
Many times we see on the site some story about "Goddesses of destruction" or something like the wrath of the goddess on the city as she destroys everything. Rarely do you see a story where the "Goddess" helps the little ones create something. I say, it is often easier to destroy than to create. And this chapter is like a teaching of that. Jeanine helps these little ones to create but helping is not enough, it is the awareness of taking care of what you have or what you have managed to create. I think that and not believing in the tendency to underestimate those "lower" than us are the teachings of this chapter. Well... at least the ones I took with me.
Author's Response:
You hit the nail on the head. My only comment would be that I never intended for Jeannine to be a 'goddess', rather just a big girl with and even bigger heart. I'm very happy you enjoyed the chapter, Kenrios!