Date: November 21 2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Special event !
Dude that was totally awesome! This is probably my favorite chapter so far! How Lindsey swallows both Alice and Monica, at the same time! That was an excellent idea. The Dune reference was funny, and very cool how a giantess can have giant creatures inside of her. But then there’s Lindsey, how can have entire giantesses walk around inside her. I had this idea how Lindsey is so large, if Andrew is ever eaten by her. He would stumble upon another tv show going on inside of Lindsey. A sort of “Lovers Island” sort of normal tv show, but inside the stomach of a gigantic. I thought that would be a silly concept. How Lindsey enters a tv show, while she already had a normals tv show filming inside her. And she forgot about it, or something like that.
On a different note, I think it’s awesome how you are writing more about the world you created. I loved “The tallest MILF.” The details you gave about the Gigantics in that world was excellent. I really liked the idea that inside the gigantic, there are worlds. They are just that big. That’s awesome.
Andrew is probably the luckiest guy on the planet right now. He has a super hot, gigantic goddess, possibly obsessing over him. Who wants him to explore her worlds. I like the irony in Lindsey, who has entire worlds inside her, has a crush on a speck of dust. It really gives that line Lindsey said in the park episode (episode 5), a new meaning. I think near the end of that episode, she says how she wants Andrew to explore her parks. I think she was implying her boobs, but after episode 14, we learn how Lindsey also has miles and miles of parks inside of her! Awesome.
Lindsey wanting Andrew to explore her lands is similar to an early event in U.S. history. There was miles and miles of land that needed to be pillaged and explored. This was called the Westward Expansion. This was personified into a giantess, in a piece of artwork called American Progress by John Gast in 1872. If you google that artwork it could possibly be the earliest piece of giantess art, for the United States, I think lol. Just like how all the virgin land was calling to the young nation, Lindsey wants Andrew to explore her lands. I just thought that was a cool similarity going on there.
I had idea that Lindsey swallows Alice and Lorena out of anger or jealousy, because Andrew prefers people his own size instead of Gigantics. So now Andrew has to go in and rescue his normal friends from the belly of the beast. When inside of Lindsey, they find out she has normals living inside of her, and these people give a feast to our normal characters, similar to what happened in Thanksgiving, almost a hundred years ago here in the U.S. The Indians gave food to the starving English when the English were at their lowest point. And this act of selflessness could probably inspire Lindsey to be nicer to those who are dust around her. It was just an idea I had while thinking about your series. Hopefully in the next episode Lindsey and Lorena are chosen, it would be a great set up for a rescue mission Andrew goes through.
Date: October 18 2020 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Living Room - Again ! Jason and Lorena
For an upcoming "vore"episode hinted at earlier, perhaps the poll could be about which contestant will be the location, Monica (Giant), Parvati (Titan), or Lindsey (Gigantic) for the Normals to pass through, or if Lindsey is selected Small and Normal to pass through.
Alice delivering the commentary at the end is a cute touch, maybe have her deliver commentary during the episodes a bit more, she seems to have a sharp tongue which could give more witty remarks about the sexual mismatches.
About Alice announcing safe vore at the end of the last episode, would the tv audience know what that means? Tallest Milf mentioned Gigantics like Celia and her friend occasionally swallowing and passing normals through them, but this isn't well known, and even things about how Gigantics eat drink and pass waste isn't public knowledge. Not sure about Titans and Giants. So is vore mostly unknown in this world? And is being swallowed by a Giant, Titan, or Gigantic and passing through her digestive tract, a first time shown on television thing?
Tallest Milf showed the digestive tract of an Gigantic and how it's different from a human one, eating and drinking garbage, peeing out water and pooping out dirt outside. But for a Giant, or Titan would there digestive systems be more like a human one? There are very large toilets in the bathroom of the house suggesting that a trip through a Giant or Titan would end there as opposed to outside with a trip through a Gigantic.
Alice is a Normal which suggests that she could fit anywhere herself, which means her "maybe they will even be able to fit in there" sarcastic remark applies to her too. Maybe she could occasionally be a selectable character. In a full tour vore episode maybe she could accompany the other Normals or Small on the trip to give on the spot commentary to help pass the time for the trip, especially if it is a television first. It's also amusing to think how she would react to the scenarios that the other normals have been subjected through so far and if she would be able to handle it better than they do.
Author's Response:
I hope you liked the vore chapter I finally put out. I chose a Giantess to go with Lindsey, but I think it worked rather well. Hopefully ?
And as you've noticed, Alice did came in ^^ I wonder how it'll go for her in the future !
Date: October 04 2020 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Bedroom - Lorena and Lupita
Good to see another story in the Gigantopia universe, hopefully another of many. The "Tallest Milf Story" was very good. Since no one has commented on a suggestion for a scenario yet, I'll give it a shot. I really enjoyed the full tour vore body exploration chapter in "The Tallest Milf" so a full tour vore (mouth to anus) body exploration with one of the larger contestants like Lindsey gulping down 1 or 2 of the smaller contestants in the living room, and having their digestive tract act as the setting for the rest of the chapter or the next chapter would be interesting. "Tallest Milf" showed it could be safely done, and it would probably be a television first for this world. Good intimacy with the larger feeling and seeing from the live feed the smaller contestant passing through her, and/or 2 smaller contestants exploring the insides of a larger being together.
Judging by the scales provided by the first chapter, Normals can be swallowed and passed through Giants, Titans, and Gigantics, while Gigantics can swallow and pass both Normals and the 70 foot Smalls, which shows how intimidatingly big they are that they can easily swallow whole something or someone as big as a bus or a whale. "Tallest Milf" showed that Gigantics eat and drink industrial waste and scrap, and expell super clean water and dirt to replenish the earth, having no need for toilets, but do the diets and digestive systems of smaller Titans and Giants work the same or are they more similar to a Normal human's. Afterall, there are toilets in the large bathroom and a large working kitchen. "Tallest Milf" had a Normal pass through a Gigantic, so it might be interesting to have a Normal pass through a Titan like Parvati, or a Giant like Monica, although a trip through a Gigantic like Lindsey by a Normal and/or a Small on television would be nice too.
For some reason involving the Javascript I can't seem to vote on strawpoll, or even see how the vote is going, but if I could vote for one character it would be the Normal Lorena, since her small size gives her the most capability to go places.
Author's Response:
Ooh ! An excellent idea ! Sadly the chosen contestants for this round are... not comptabile with it :)
However, I keep in mind because it's really great !
Date: September 24 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Watching TV - Lindsey and Andrew
Man, if Andrew is still alive... and I'm not really giving him great odds... he might start trying to get out of the deal with the showrunners. Unless breach of contract would mean Lindsey just owns him. Maybe that's why Alice is suddenly so nervous.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm not sure the deal didn't take it into account. But I've got a feeling he and Lindsey will meet again :) !
Date: August 26 2020 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 – The Dining Room – Jason, Lindsey and Parvati
Great chapter! I sent a direct message a while back not sure if you received it but I'm a big fan of your work. Was wondering if you had discord or any way of communication? Have several questions regarding the GTS world you created :) look forward to speaking with ya
Author's Response:
I may have received it and never known it, I didn't even knew there was a PM messagery here !
But you can contact me on deviantart if you will :)
https://www.deviantart.com/eraten
I don't really use Discord since I'm not a native English speaker and I know a lot of readers may be more situated in the US or at elast not in Europe, so I don't want to force anyone to get up/go to bed at bad hours, really !
Date: August 04 2020 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the cast and the rules
Cool idea, I only wish you listed what the interests of each character would be to get an idea of their personalities for voting.
Wish you luck in the endevour! Excited to see how it goes.
Author's Response:
Well, to be honest, not describing their personnalities at first is part of the main reason I wrote this xD !
It'll allow for shorter, kinkier chapters - and it'll be fun to discover those on the fly :) !
Date: August 04 2020 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the cast and the rules
it said "link not found" when i typed it in.
Author's Response:
If you copy and paste, it doesn't work ? It does for me, but I'm the one who created the poll, so...