[Report This]Date: March 18 2025 5:21 AM Title: Sean
Really enjoyed the concept of the friends thought of this as a prank and it totally back fired. Could you maybe do another chapter like this but with m/m. I loved seeing more unaware m plots too in this serious, I loved the brothers belly chapter the most so far. Would love a shrinky maybe shrinks to flea size and ends in the hands of some cocky boys who are unaware about the cruel events and things go really bad for the shrinky.
Date: March 17 2025 7:39 PM Title: Sean
It was a great episode. I think it would be great if we see the characters from the Shrinkism series more often. I love the Shrinkism universe, it's one of my favorite series on this site, by the way, will the series continue? I'd love to see more shrinkism =)
[Report This]Date: March 16 2025 7:41 PM Title: Sean
I enjoyed this new addition a lot. I do think a quick scene of her coming back and realizing her co-worker sold Sean, and maybe his friends coming back to find him gone before we got into the action with her and Sean would have been a nice touch though
Date: March 04 2025 10:22 AM Title: Tess
Would love to see Jason screw up and have his exasperated mother take him for a ‘conclusion’ with Abby. Perhaps this could take place some months after his 2nd time with her, after he’s had time to recover and forget a bit about the potential danger (or perhaps he takes it for granted she won’t do him harm based on surviving the previous occasions and believing she’s just trying to scare him)?
[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 7:56 PM Title: Brother's Belly
enjoyed this chapter so much the idea with the calicium ball was awesome love the sarcasm and jokes and all during the plot of the boy making it worse and worse and then have a blast on the toilet literally expelling that ball of his sisters bones. totally would like to see more in this style
[Report This]Date: October 02 2024 7:59 PM Title: Brother's Belly
Chapter 20 brothers belly was one of the best of the entire series. I cant say how much I loved this chapter. would love to see more in the same style maybe even have an entire series like this chapter as a mix of aware and unaware male characters. reminded me of Bugs, The Boys, and Their Beast and Luke.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2024 11:58 PM Title: One last bender
Good chapter. I enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2024 4:44 PM Title: One last bender
Terrific story! I really enjoy these one-offs, I can't wait for more.
Date: November 27 2023 5:14 AM Title: Merry times
I'm still loving Mary being a worried, overprotective mom towards Ryan and casually cruel and dismissive towards all other shrinkies.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2023 11:04 PM Title: Car Problems
Amazing as always!! You’re my favorite writer on this site :D
[Report This]Date: September 17 2023 7:51 AM Title: Lucky night
This is such a great story! What a fun pair of ladies!
[Report This]Date: April 15 2023 11:47 PM Title: Threesome
Another great chapter. So Bell has moved on from Chris and married Ross, eh? Only 9 stars since you pulled the ole nightmare rug.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2023 11:20 PM Title: A Day at Abby's Shop
Pretty good. This would make for a great rewrite where an insistent customer who becomes infatuated with Jason, offers a crazy amount of money to Abby, who eventually gets worn down and gives in, then tries to rationalize what happened later to her friend, the boy's mother. Or perhaps she blames it on an accident of some sort.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2023 11:07 PM Title: A day with Abby part 2
Nice 2-part story. Would like to see a continuation where Jason behaves for awhile before returning to his ways and then gets a part 3 with Abby, this time with her not quite as eager to just scare him.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2023 10:54 PM Title: The Breakup Party
Love the idea for this one; a very erotic chapter and great story. I like the callous nature of the gf and the rest of the partygoers. I like the games (shrinky beer pong, shrinky truth or dare). Love the twist with Beth and then the tired and upset gf. And I thought the way in which the the ex-bf is finally dispatched is very well done. One issue I have is clothing - the shrinkies should have been forced to strip down upon getting put into the bowl.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 8:40 PM Title: The Reunion
Great erotic chapter. Great setup and pacing and good dialogue made this a believable plot. Well done. That said, there are some grammar and mis-spellings that require cleaning up. And there were a couple tidbits near the very end (farting, squirting, water sports) that I felt were unnecessary and perhaps an effort by the author to please everyone - they didn't really belong in this story.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 2:54 AM Title: What's a Brother For
A really good erotic chapter. I love how he tries to impress his potential girlfriend and how she manipulates him. Some very good dialogue here by the girl.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 2:34 AM Title: Tess
This is a great, very erotic chapter. I love the descriptions of the shrinkie's reactions in this one and his realization of what is happening to him.
Date: August 20 2022 2:55 PM Title: Tess
Great story and I love how Ally is turning into the psycho girlfriend that will let nothing get between her and her little man. I suppose breaking up with her isn't a option if he wants to live. I suppose sooner or later, she'll want him to move into her house so her can be with her 24x7 and no one will get between them. Can't wait to see a part 2.
Date: July 30 2022 9:45 AM Title: The New Girl
I honestly really liked this story up until the end. I think killing off the best friend is a pretty quick way for the relationship to end or at least makes it awkward if you ever wanted to continue with these characters who seemed really fun and interesting.