enjoyed this chapter so much the idea with the calicium ball was awesome love the sarcasm and jokes and all during the plot of the boy making it worse and worse and then have a blast on the toilet literally expelling that ball of his sisters bones. totally would like to see more in this style

Good chapter. I enjoyed it.

I'm still loving Mary being a worried, overprotective mom towards Ryan and casually cruel and dismissive towards all other shrinkies.

This is such a great story! What a fun pair of ladies!

Pretty good. This would make for a great rewrite where an insistent customer who becomes infatuated with Jason, offers a crazy amount of money to Abby, who eventually gets worn down and gives in, then tries to rationalize what happened later to her friend, the boy's mother. Or perhaps she blames it on an accident of some sort.

Love the idea for this one; a very erotic chapter and great story. I like the callous nature of the gf and the rest of the partygoers. I like the games (shrinky beer pong, shrinky truth or dare). Love the twist with Beth and then the tired and upset gf. And I thought the way in which the the ex-bf is finally dispatched is very well done. One issue I have is clothing - the shrinkies should have been forced to strip down upon getting put into the bowl.

A really good erotic chapter. I love how he tries to impress his potential girlfriend and how she manipulates him. Some very good dialogue here by the girl.

Great story and I love how Ally is turning into the psycho girlfriend that will let nothing get between her and her little man.  I suppose breaking up with her isn't a option if he wants to live.  I suppose sooner or later, she'll want him to move into her house so her can be with her 24x7 and no one will get between them.  Can't wait to see a part 2.

Another fantastic chapter. 

As for what you had in mind, perhaps sand would be a good place to introduce some unaware or semi aware crushing. Since it's sand they may be compacted and crushed partially without killing them outright immediately so it's a good way to get in some great crushing descriptions while tiny person can escape with merely a few broken bones and cuts for more stories later. Perhaps he gets stepped on by a few members of her family, perhaps even his girlfriend herself, before being found. A wet foot is also easy to stick to and would represent a real challenge for the tiny to escape before they're shoved into some footwear or get crushed against an actually hard ground surface 

Absolutely fantastic story. Excellent use of wordplay and alliteration to keep the story fresh. You managed to convey the sense of fear incredibly well and the casual way that Maria toys with the tiny is fantastic.

Keep up the good work!