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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

good god... this story is awesome.
completely captivating.
this story seems really familiar though. although, it seems different at the same time, lol(hard to explain).

hope to read more of this badass story.

aaron

ps the foot/toe scenes were incredible, and the details and the emotions of the characters was very realistic.
well done

Reviewer: Lortelars16 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic!
Please make a new chapter, about when they arrive at karens house.. :)

I would like if you could write something about, that Karens force her slaves to lick her giant pussy and feet ;)
But great story

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 08 2009 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start, love the foot fetish stuff! More please

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2008 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ye gad! It's like a flashback to chapter one of "Web of Deceit," my very first gts-story.

What a non-spaced nightmare that was!

Reviewer: JWright610 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2008 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is great just how i want it to start. Only one thing, could you put spaces in between you paragraphs, it will help me stay on track. thank you and keep up the good work.

you can e-mail me at jasonwright2255@yahoo.com because something is wrong with my other e-mail account

Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2008 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

really? big block of text? I'm not going to rate this story unless you fix this gross display of non-indentaion! It's not that difficult. All you have to do is press "enter" when another subject comes up or there is another speaker. I really hope you do this, because it will turn off most people from reading what might be a really good story.

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Zalrus IX 

Reviewer: WebbUK Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2008 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, I actually really enjoyed this chapter.. Great use of characters and scenarios.

But please. Could you put some spaces between paragraphs, Stanza's ect. My eyes hurt damnit! :'(

P.S I don't believe reviews can be stated numerically.

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