Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2020 9:52 AM Title: Beastkin Pair

I just discovered this story and read through all three chapters nearly without pausing.

All three had a very unique part of it.

That Alian was actually able to barely beat (though not kill) the slimegirl of the first chapter was a very rare occurence as we frankly come here to see the tinies perish hopelessly. A nice change of pace every once in a while.

The second chapter with a at baseline gentle, but absolutely uncaring giantess as she was solely interested in Alain's Cargo was also one of a kind. At least paired with a "homeran" siren as if you want an avian monsterwoman to appear most people tend to choose a Harpy nowadays. The idea that they drilled themselves to safety was a first as well as far as my story recollections go.

The third chapter was an absolute homerun to me as I love Multisize scenarios.

Interesting decision that Rona was tiny due to her "mousy" heritage, but Lysa was "unaffected" albeit Lynxes are smaller than humans, one would think she would be around the average lynx size of 110cm, but maybe she's just exceptionally tall for her kind. Given her personality she probably wouldn't care in the slightest.

I know the story is probably long dead but I would've liked to see Alain to get into a sort of bar fight with a fairy or a female dwarf and end up shrunken to be about her size and then "properly" brawl with her. Given Rona's comment about her six year old niece and Alain's status it would likely not go well for him unless Gale intervened. Granted, she would most likely not allowed to enter any bar in the first place, unless it's a buildingside counter and even then it's unlikely.