[Report This]Date: April 14 2023 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Sign-up sheet
This story was incredible! I would love to see an alternate chapter for 22, where he tells Yuan that he doesn’t mind helping her as much as she wants, that’s the main chapter I wish kept going for a bit! Or one where he had to go to Ms. Oliver’s home at half the size.
Date: November 05 2022 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Sign-up sheet
please tell me you are writing more stories like this, this is one of the best if not the best story I have ever read…
I need more stories with giantess moms and teacher (to give you an idea a scientist mother testing on her son :))
this would make me very happy, congratulations for your writing work
Date: January 08 2021 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Amber's fury, and Loren's reemergence
Kind of sad it's over without the mom or even principal getting a turn, but this was pretty good, hope you'll do more foot related stuff in the future!
Date: January 07 2021 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Amber's fury, and Loren's reemergence
I hope it isn't over yet, I'd love to see more about Loren and Brett together, a continuation or some such thing would be great :D
P.S. Not even a foot guy, just love the writing and setting (And the vore & sex)
Date: December 19 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Amber's fury, and Loren's reemergence
Lol, like I said, it was all very good, and maybe I just selfishly didn't want it to end yet lol. I respect your choices as an author, and well, I wanted loose ends to be tied up assuming there wouldn't be a sequel, but if you want to revisit this unvierse you created, please go right ahead when you feel like it. I think I'll enjoy whatever you decide to write. I understood your points, the story ended up in a good note after all.
Date: December 18 2020 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Amber's fury, and Loren's reemergence
Huh, I didn't even know that was supposed to be the story's end until I double checked. It's an excellent story, but the ending feels weird in my opinion, kinda anticlimatic. Not because of any of it being badly written, but simply because it seemed there'd be so much more to cover, in other words, it felt like it ended too soon.
I think many loose ends were left, like actually finishing the certification program (I know it was implied, but he didn't meet the principal again), or what would happen with Brett's mom and him. Amber's villainous subplot was pretty good, but I felt it ended too early lol. Then again, she already had gone for a nuclear option so if she got any other chances to get her hands on him, she'd definitely kill him, I understand that. I thought she'd be more subtle and try to exact her revenge via torture rather than just kill him.
Anyway, you're the author and I respect that. I hope there's a sequel of this
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment!
Sorry to hear that you didn't approve of the ending. I will take the criticism that the last chapter could have been two chapters to flow at a better pace, but you might be missing why I chose the exact moment to end. The character's development has allowed him to form a sincere, loving bond with another character in the course of what turned out to be an unpleasant duty for him. I wanted that warmth to linger. I don't derive much satisfaction from dwelling on mean-spirited torturous exploits, though I do grant that the threat of violence can be necessary for certain motivations in the characters to be plausible, and violence delivered unintentionally or with reluctance can still be titillating.
Adding a scene at the end, or even throwing in an interstitial scene where he is given hollow congratulations and veiled threats by the principal in demanding good behavior - well, that wouldn't add much in my opinion, and I thought you could already imagine that was what would happen.
So while I do think pace matters, I am philosophically against tying up all the loose ends (especially if there is a possibility of revisiting the world). Some writers think that Chekov's gun should always be fired, but I'm in the Hemingway camp where I think that is a bit fussy and silly - and it can lead to even more clumsiness.
[Report This]Date: December 17 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Amber's fury, and Loren's reemergence
Hey I really liked this chapter as I feel it was a good and fitting end to the story, I was really surprised to see Umaima again. I am honestly really excited to see what your story will be about whenever you get the time. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment!
Date: November 23 2020 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Yuan Gu's feet, and delivery to the enemy
Wait until his mom hears what he just did, or until everyone realizes he only said no that ONE time... on the other hand, it's finally time for hte Amazing Amber!
Author's Response:
Hehe everyone has their limits... Brett has desires but he has been through the ringer today and I have to be realistic at some point - he's just tired and worn out.
Thanks for your comment!
Date: November 23 2020 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Yuan Gu's feet, and delivery to the enemy
Yes!!!!
I was hoping for an update on this story and you did not dissapoint.
Wow ok ,so I loved his time under Yuan's feet. The difference between hers, being rough athlete + mature feet was a great combination. I loved how you described them as being like rough construction paper with smelly weights.
Her feet definitely are tough, the description of their texture, their smell and sweat was really hot.
I also loved her dominant attitude and control over Brett. (The backstory with her and Wendy was a nice touch too)
I wouldn't mind seeing more of Yuan, it also is a great precedent of her making her son watch Brett, she definitely has her eyes set on him 'honoring' her feet in future.
Nice seeing Loren again :D It's great that she's still looking out for Brett (and I still love their relationship, and where it could go in future)
But damn! The egotistical bitch the Amoral Amber (Yes, I know what it is XD) is back.
Wendy.....really, you just handed him over to the girl. (sighs)
Whatever the circumstances, I know Brett is probably going to have a detour on his way home.
Another fantastic chapter, keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! The pace has slowed a lot since I've just moved house and had way too many home projects to undertake, but I can do a bit of writing on the weekends now.
You may be quite assured that when I finish this I willl mark it completed, I don't like to abandon stories randomly.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2020 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 21 - The track girls finish, and Yuan Gu enters
Another great chapter, can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: October 26 2020 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 21 - The track girls finish, and Yuan Gu enters
Nice work on finishing up the track girl experience. Brett was definitely put through the ringer there.
Yeah, Nancy has lost any chance of me liking her. I think one reviewer said it best, she's practically abusing Brett at this point (and the whole incident where she had their neighbour use him) and now threatening him to play along with her demands. She's a fucking bitch, and that's a nicer way I would descrbibe her.
I am so happy you brought in Yuan, from her short intro here I was right to be excited, now Brett is going to experience the rough and honed feet of a sexy dominant chinese athelete XD
I can't wait to see more of Yuan and her feet, I wonder if Brett will get any 'release' under those toes, or be forced to release.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: October 17 2020 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Nancy's track team's feet
I thought you'd left us. Another great chapter! I hope he doesn't miss the opportunity to be under his mom's feet though!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Lol I am just in the process of moving house soon, and work has been crazy busy, so I haven't gotten to write as regularly.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2020 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Nancy's track team's feet
This chapter was probably the hottest and saddest for me.
I mean I knew that brett was fucking over the other students for his own gains but the way ada worded it really hit hard.
Coupled with the bits of Brett's past with unknowingly manipulating and belittling Ada really hit hard especially when Brett resorted to humor when he lost credibility really shined a light on other bits of Bretts character for me.
AAAAAnd on top of Nancy my god I'm having a hard time believing she cares about Brett with all the abuse she's been sending his way, I get that she wants to teach him a lesson but it makes me wonder what would happen if Brett got seriously hurt. Like, fuck me man I get that sometimes you need to give some tough love but maybe cool your jets a bit Nancy.
Overall this chapter kind of opened my eyes to how much Brett isn't an adult yet, no matter how much he might think otherwise or even if he is one year off of 18.
On a side note, Lee-Reilly both simultaneously turns me on and terrifies me beyond belief and I can't help but feel that she is the big bad and the end of the story and I pray that she doesn't get her way.
some of this was me just venting frustrations sorry bout that. Overall 10/10
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I am really glad that you enjoyed that bit because it was personal for me. Our protagonist Brett is not blameless, he has hurt other people before, very often without knowing it. But he's not really unlike other teenagers in that regard. Ada is someone he took for granted, in a sense, and didn't realize how he was affecting her. They are all growing at this age.
Nancy would do well to realize that same lesson- that her son is still growing and she is affecting him for the worse in ways she doesn't understand; he no longer responds to one-dimensional, heavy-handed moralizing as he maybe did when he was younger.
Date: October 17 2020 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Nancy's track team's feet
I'm not a foot fan like him, but I do miss FTFeet's writing.
That being said, the principal promised one 24h "creative" detention for every day he's late, and Nancy promised she was going to make his day with her much worse than any threat by Lee Reilly, so I can't wait to see what else she has in store! That it all started 15 seconds after waking up definitely sets the tone for it...
Kudos to Ayla for pointing out that he's screwed if any teacher fails to certify - I'm waiting to see if that happens, or if there's any delay for any reason.
Btw, maybe I'm forgetting something - what's the problem with the principal finding another volunteer?
Author's Response:
Not all of those worst-case scenarios will be explored in this story, FYI - but may be done so in spin-offs.
The problem is that Lee-Reilly has been forbidden by her bosses from doing any more shrinkee recruiting. This was an attempt by school district administrators to limit damage in case the program fails and they are accused of rushing out sloppy unsafe shrinking programs, but permitting them to take credit if this program succeeded against the odds. You may assume that after the initial call for volunteers that there were some angry calls from parents about the entire program, and some whispers from the state capitol about whether this is actually legal under existing precedent. It all comes down to politics, and the school district is afraid both of retribution from state-level officials and by potentially litigious parents. The fact that Brett volunteered as the son of an employee of the school (Nancy) and the brother of another employee (Don) gives them extra leverage over him, so Lee-Reilly was not explicitly told to discontinue her work with him - that's why she has pinned all her hopes on him and tried to use coercion to get the certifications done.
Date: October 17 2020 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Nancy's track team's feet
Good lord, without a doubt my favorite chapter thus far and I'm already sure next chapter will be even better! Love all the details here, especially to how Nancy seems to be creating a long list of people for Brett to "help" in case he isn't desuaded after today. I'm eager to see how far Brett is pushed, after all, she seems intent on breaking his desire on being a full-time shrinkee once and for all now. Here's hoping he is up for the task, even if it seems sisyphean in nature. Hope you are doing well too!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I'm doing very well, hope the same for you!
Date: October 17 2020 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Nancy's track team's feet
Nancy.....*sighs*.....still think she's being a bitch, I just struggle to like her with her freaking attitude.
Brett certainly went through a marathon.....(he he) of feet in this chapter. I knew Amber was going to be trouble!!
She has a seemingly giant sized ego even without needing any shrinkees around, 'the amazing amber'.....seriously.
But Feet wise, Brett had a lot of different soles and toes he got to taste, and seemingly will taste, so feet and kink wise, some nice choices.
The mouth scene was ok too, and I love that Loren is still checking in. ( I still ship her and Brett so hard!)
I am excited to see Mr's Gu's sister. Yuan seems like she'll be a treat, a dominant asian woman with some powerful feet (smelly and rough and athletic, combined with her attitude, ooh that is going to be a good one) Combine that with the language barrier, that is a tantalizing tease you've left us with.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the feedback!
You've got a good grasp on who the villains are ;)
Date: October 14 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
this is great i loev stories about teachers and this might be the best one on the platform thank you for making this i hope we see alice gomez again as she is my favourite but im exited for what you have next
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words! We'll see about Alicia.
Date: October 03 2020 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Mrs. Alka Padmanabhan
I'm not really counting on it, but there's a 0.01% possibility that Nancy will believe he's staying in the shrinking program as an angry reaction to her, ehm, creative punishment, and go a bit easier on him... not that I'm counting on it.
On the other it seems that his teachers are getting strange ideas about him, his tastes and his motivations, not sure how he's getting out of that.
And I'm still waiting to see what a certain fellow student has in store for him... did I mention how much I love this story?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! We'll see... ;)
Date: October 02 2020 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Mrs. Alka Padmanabhan
Great chapter, but I'm a bit confused, does the protagonist have a foot fetish or not? It seemed like in previous chapters he was more than willing to lick and clean feet, like with Gu and Erenli, but this time he didn't want to. It could be that I didn't read well enough, but was just curious. If it were me I'd be all into those Indian feet! Anyway, can't wait to see what it's like with his mom in charge.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! Well, you're getting really close to the meaning I'm trying to explore. Of course Brett has a foot fetish, but with real people, usually enjoyment of these fantasies is contingent on the right circumstances in which they are enjoyable to be explored. For Brett, the whole experience is kind of ruined if it is produced by someone who is emotionless, impersonal, sees it as a transactional thing, and doesn't seem to be enjoying herself at all. He would much rather be with someone playful and self-indulgent, or even a situation where someone was crassly capricious and domineering, but true ambivalence is not sexy to him (or me for that matter). There's also the point again about sexual maturity in that he finds it very hard to understand and contextualize his feelings as a 17-year old, and so it's a learning process for him too.
Date: October 02 2020 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Mrs. Samson and Nancy's unaware friend Melissa
good lord this chapter is sexy. love what Melissa does with tiny Brett so she can get her rocks off! can't help imaging her having to continually break wind while she busting a nut with him in her ass. hope there's more of this, more of Melissa!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! Glad you enjoyed it.