Date: September 08 2020 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Alicia's Exit and Loren Issakinen's Interview
(would have reviewed earlier but my computer decided to reload and I lost the review I was writing)
Loved this chapter, it was great seeing more of Brett and Alicia.
I also liked how she was honest with Brett about her desires and her thoughts on him having been toyed with in her ass, it was an interesting dynamic as well as her being married and how it affected them both.
You summed it up well, and left a great 'what if' scenario that they both will most likely not be able to replicate again.
I am very excited for the next chapter with Loren, she seems like a great and interesting character (as you've established with the other characters so far) and I am looking forward to her interaction with Shrunken-Brett.
I'm also interested in seeing Mrs Samson in a future chapter, you mentioned Brett thinking she would be harsh and strict, which would be fun to see, but perhaps it might only be a front for students, and in private she's the opposite.
......or maybe sjhe's just as strict and harsh in private too XD
But we'll have to wait and see.
I'm looking forward to seeing Loren's time with Brett :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support! Wrapping up a good character is tough but you are right in that it is hard to replicate the conditions...
Ms. Issakinen will be my favorite - and of course you'll get a chapter with Mrs. Samson after.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2020 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Sign-up sheet
I've been enjoying this story a lot! The variety is good, and you've got some genuinely decent writing, the little bits of foreshadowing are keeping me hooked. I'm enjoying the unchecked - even merciless - hedonism that some of the characters are displaying.
Relating to a review by a previous user, who wanted to 'remind' you that this is a gentle giantess story - it's your story and you should write it how you enjoy. Nothing wrong with a bit of fan service of course but it's especially cheeky for someone to tell you what NOT to include!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate the support. And I must say I dig that expression "unchecked, merciless hedonism." :)
Date: September 04 2020 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Somehow (I'm stubborn) I still see Alicia pretty much tell Nancy... well, pretty much the last paragraph; not sure if asking her permission, or advice, or just to chat.
The unexpected message was a great idea! It didn't work 100% for me because I didn't remember he could shrink himself, so when I saw her misunderstanding I thought "wtf, really?" instead of "wow, I didn't see it coming"; but still good job!
PS
Ah, ok, by your reply I thought you had no idea where "Sentra" (the word) was coming from in your story :D
Author's Response:
Thanks. Sorry, I don't really understand your comment - Alicia doesn't tell Nancy anything in the last paragraph of any of my chapters.
I get what you are saying about the believability in the final part of this chapter, but let me just suggest that as you read, try to recall how poorly prepared Alicia was for this session: In this world's logic, Brett's wrist control is for communication only, and cannot be used to shrink or grow himself, but Alicia simply doesn't know that, since she didn't read the paperwork or training materials. She guessed that he was shrinking himself further because she felt him shrink without her doing anything, because it didn't occur to her that her kids had unlocked her phone and were pulling a prank. And there was a personal motive, because she wanted to believe that he was enjoying himself in her big ass.
Date: September 04 2020 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Amazing! Definitely looking forward to the rest of this story overall, but for now, hell yeah for Mrs. Gomez's booty, looking forward for more of it in the next chapter, lol. I wasn't expecting her to be that flirty, nice touch!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
Alas, I still have several more teachers to cycle Brett through - Alicia is going to have to take a backseat in the next chapter, or this story will never end. :)
Date: September 04 2020 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Another really cute and flirty teacher!
Part of me REALLY wants Alicia to find out what her kids are doing and implement shrunken foot punishment in her household that same night! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Lol I know what you mean.
Date: September 04 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
So far this story has balanced building the background and delving into Brett's experiences extremely well. I loved the latest two chapters, especially the growing lore to the world and how Lee-Riely had tricked Gomez into making the experience just a bit more memorable for Brett by having her wear her old thick socks. I'm hoping he has even more memorable experience with the next few teachers and am super excited to read the chapters about Issakinen. I'd love to see more overwhelmingly of Brett's senses, and hopefully more regret as he second guessed if the deal is worth it. If there's another chapter where he is mistaken for an offender or there's a cultural miscommunication that leads to him being disciplined without little remorse I think that would be super awesome. Regardless, I can't wait for whatever comes next.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I think you'll get what you are looking for with at least one future chapter.
Date: September 04 2020 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Another great chapter :D
(Oh and as for my review of the last chapter, I meant to say the other character, Amber Obrien was the one going to be a bitch to him and be trouble.
For this chapter, more great interaction with Mrs Gomes and Brett, some more feet action and some downtime.
I like butt action, but farts aren't really an interest of mine.
With that being said, it was still well written and Mrs Gomez was really enjoying having Brett up under and between her cheeks.
Excited as always to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
That's fair enough. Farting is one of my favorite giantess activities; it's hard for me to do butt stuff and not put it in.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2020 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
The ending of the chapter was suspicious, however your story is about gentle or not violent giantesses , you should remember that. And it'll be good to have a chapter of Brett and the Awesome Amber trying to know each other , and then they'll fall in love with each other . Thanks you are the gtswood star this year
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment, but I disagree about my story. This is "gentle" inasmuch as I dont want the protagonist to be injured or killed, or for an antagonist to be a totally undeveloped psycho with no motivation for what they're doing. You should not expect that he is going to do everything 100% willingly and that every giantess is going to be sweet to him. I don't consider that the basis of an interesting story.
Amber is an antagonist, and there's no chance of them falling in love - let's leave it at that.
Date: September 02 2020 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
Another great chapter, and lol, you 're definitely delivering. Awesome! Looking forward to the next one! And specially looking forward to booty content, but overall the story is pretty solid. Personally, I hope he stays at half an inch tall when she decides to go for it.
On an unrelated note, the final paragraph was a bit strange to me, it looked like Amber was talking to someone at first, it had me do a double take on it. But then again, English isn't even my first language so, maybe it's on me.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support!
All the "dialog" in the last segment was in Amber's thoughts. Amber was outside the back of the school waiting for a ride from her stepdad. She saw Alicia and Brett in the car (they did not notice her) and she realized Brett was the shrinkee and started thinking about what that entailed.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2020 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
I was thinking that his mom will need to ask how he did before she decides if she makes it hell for him or not, and Alicia looks like she will tell her everything before she even asks... really, you made her so exhuberant that I'm hardly thinking of the Amazing Amber!
PS
I didn't remember who Sentra is, but it's right in front of my eyes as I'm writing this :)
(and google says it's sentra.it - bad google!)
Author's Response:
Ah, Mrs. Henderson already has her mind made up. She and her son have been quarreling for a while now, and she has steadily lost power over him as he has gotten closer to his sketchy banker dad. When she gets her turn, she's going to be the roughest and most vindictive giantess in the whole story.
There is no person named Sentra in my story... you and the previous poster confused me. Did you both miss the part where I said that Alicia's car is a Nissan Sentra?? Lol.
Date: September 01 2020 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
Anoher great chapter, and teacher.
Loved the lively interaction between Brett and Mrs Gomez, the mouth scenes were great.
Plus her having some big feet that were cooking in those socks before Brett's arrival was a nice touch, gave Brett a much more flavorful feast XD
Not sure how I feel about Sentra, she seems like she's going to be a massive (pun intended) bitch to Brett, and could cause trouble to his so far, mostly pleasant and consensual fun.
Would love to see more Mrs Gomez, along with some returns from Ms Gwu and Ms Erenli :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
Lol who is Sentra?
Date: August 31 2020 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Miss Erenli's mouth, and interlopers
I really like how the mom gets a turn at the end!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2020 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Sign-up sheet
Another excellent chapter! Feels kind of like 2 chapters rolled into 1!
You gotta be careful, you add 2-3 new characters every chapter and all the reviews are "More of this one!" haha!
Author's Response:
Thanks! This chapter did take longer to write.
This story has to do some world-building and in the process of creating situations to define the in-world expectations, there will be some characters that don't get to shine. But that just leaves more opportunities for the future! :)
Date: August 30 2020 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Miss Erenli's mouth, and interlopers
Amazing story overall, though for me Mrs Miller was quite a tease, lol. Any chances we get a chapter where she indeed puts Brett in her big ol' booty? Or an alternate version of this chapter? Sorry if it's too much to ask, your story rocks anyway. One of the better ones I've seen here.
If by any chance, you go through with the alternate chapter, I'd personally like if something happened like Mrs. Miller didn't exactly how to operate well the controller and maybe shrank Brett a lot more than she intended (an inch / half an inch), so he'd be trapped in the plumpest booty we've seen so far in the story. I wouldn't mind some farts while at it either, lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you! If you'd like more big booty action, rest assured it's coming from other Westwood teachers.
I won't be doing alternative chapters, that isn't really my style. It just makes it hard to do serial timelines where events build on each other. I like maintaining continuity and don't generally want to interfere with it just to explore a missed opportunity - but I do try to leave it so that characters may be revisited in future stories though. Especially if they didn't have much time to shine, like Mrs. Miller.
Date: August 30 2020 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Miss Erenli's mouth, and interlopers
Another fantastoc chapter!!!
Loving the interaction with with Miss Erenli, again some really well written feet interaction with her and I love her attitude and interaction with Brett.
And I love that you inlcluded her mother, nice to see Brett having some time with some more women on the mature-side of things. Love the description of her feet and mouth play with Brett, and loved her take on the experience (how she felt having him service her in those ways)
Hope this isn't the last time we see Umaima :)
All in all, another great chapter, and some great content.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!
I really like Miss Erenli because she represents the kind of gentle, humble, and tiny-bit mischievous impulse that I like to see in giantesses. Her mother is really a very similar person, but there's the added layer of a communication gap, language difficulty, and preconceptions about shrinking that lead her to her treating him a little differently.
Date: August 25 2020 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Miss Erenli's commuting feet
Big fan of the daily updates the last few days.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I can't keep that up though. Weekly is far more manageable.
Date: August 25 2020 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Miss Erenli's commuting feet
Ok, so this is a review for the last few chapters.
I loved loved LOVED The Mrs Gwu's feet chapters, they were very well written and the description of Brett's interaction with her feet and their smell/etc was done so well, very sexy.
I'm hoping we get to see Brett have some fun with her sister.
This chapter was so well done too, plus some foreboding with Brett's mother XD
His interaction with Ms Erenli was a great light toned interaction, plus some more great foot content.
Any possibility he's going to interact with her mother? It seemed like the interaction where she spoke about living with her mother, and her not speaking much english, could have been a set up for some interaction with Brett in future?
Anyway, have been loving these latest chapters, and so excited for more! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
What happens next with Miss Erenli and her mother? Does any of Mrs. Gu's circle come in? We'll see in coming chapters ;)
Date: August 25 2020 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Sign-up sheet
Do you know that i am syrian , i live in iraq know , thank you for showing us man , i really appreciate it , mondialisation . More
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback, I did not know that you were Syrian. I'm not, I'm a Franco/German-American.
The character of Miss Erenli is based on a young woman I knew in college in the US a number of years ago. She spoke Turkish and Arabic in addition to English. As she was the only one I knew from that country (to my knowledge anyway), I can't claim that I will be offering a particularly good or representative characterization of a Syrian woman or family. But I do try to be culturally sensitive.
Date: August 24 2020 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Threats and resignation
I'll admit that I was tempted to suggest you "it's your first story, keep it simple, wrap it up, make a 2nd/3rd episode when you have a few more stories under your belt"; I'm glad I didn't!
I have a fondness for people getting screwed by the fine print or similar, so starting with this chapter I'm not exactly an unbiased observer, but anyway GOOD JOB!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the feedback! We're of the same mind on legally or socially binding minutiae; it's one of my favorite ways to see plots develop.
I have trouble finishing stories. I used to write a lot, but this is just my first time writing this kind of content. I think this story will probably need about 20 chapters, but if I go much beyond that, you can tell me to call it quits. :)
Date: August 24 2020 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Mrs. Gu's feet
Wow! Great work!
I must admit, I'm not the biggest fan of odors and... bodily secretions/residues, but I love this story and premise!
In particular, Wendy is my favorite so far! She's very sweet and playful. I've loved everything from when she ate a strawberry to make her mouth sweeter all the way to her teasing him at her feet. I kind of hope that when she referred to getting a shrinkee to help her feet relax, that she does end up asking Brett, and that she takes him up on his offer to let her loan him to her sister and friends!
Great work so far! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words!