Reviewer: DrTritium Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2020 2:14 PM Title: Dental Hygiene

You have a very descriptive writing style, which is well-suited to this sort of story. I think a problem a lot of G/t writers have, myself included, is not spending enough time on the scene. You're also able to keep your descriptions fresh and not repetitive. I'm curious what process you use to imagine and immerse yourself to get this sort of detail? 

I think this could actually be a fun series, imagining the life of various tiny servants performing different functions. Perhaps there is a sort of a caste system depending on the task one is assigned to? I think with your style, you could have fun with different kinds of servants. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! This is so kind. I'd love to chat about process some time if you'd like, feel free to drop me a line any time over on twitter (@aminifriend)! 

I was imagining while I was writing this that she might have a whole house full of other tiny servants like this guy. It might be fun to explore some time, though I'll admit I'm partial to more loving/coupley G/t relationships.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2020 10:26 PM Title: Dental Hygiene

Great story, very vivid descriptions. Mouthplay is a favorite of mine so I enjoyed this a lot. My only criticism is that you used the word "bodily" a lot, which became slightly distracting. But otherwise, excellent work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read this. =) You're 100% right on 'bodily,' I'm going to take a spin at trimming those down quite a bit; thank you for the feedback!