[Report This]Date: August 23 2020 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
Haven't left a review on the last couple chapters, but the story is still enjoyable! Hope we get more of Fi and Vell's first meeting.
Author's Response:
That's exactly what the next chapter is about, with a little twist added! Balancing between Fi's "memories" and her actions in the present is not easy but I'm glad the result is still enjoyable. Hope you enjoy what's next!
[Report This]Date: July 20 2020 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is such a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing it. Eagerly looking for more
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it! And I'm sorry for the momentary break, my birthday week has been busier than expected
[Report This]Date: July 11 2020 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
While this reads like a translated work, it is still fully engaging and definitely interesting. Your memoir style prose certainly brings you more fully into the story.
I'm interested in seeing more.
Author's Response:
If you want to find an excuse within the story itself, you may think that it is read as a translation since it's a translation from Spanish to English by a Spanish woman who has been speaking in Aekun for almost 20 years, being the only moments where she spoke again in Earth languages with her Spanish-Italian family.
Honestly I am very sorry if any part is difficult to read, I will try to correct the text more write more part of it in english directly nex time.
I'm glad you are interested enough to comment and thanks for the score!
Date: June 28 2020 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lets see where this goes.