Date: August 05 2020 4:01 AM Title: 8: New Bod New Me
Great story so far!!! Maybe have a chapter where 3-4 small men have sex with Julia or another soon to be giantess??? :)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2020 2:49 PM Title: 1: Arrival
I do love this story! big fan of the story and the growth/shrinking going on!
Date: July 26 2020 4:42 AM Title: 12: The Search Begins
Great chapter as usual. I'm feeling kinda iffy about Julia. She REALLY wants brent. At the same time I worry about brent and Haley. Even tho she didn't directly say it, clearly she isn't satisfied with brents shrinking size. I don't know if the end product is for Haley to move on to another guy who can satisfy her needs and lead in with Julia as the one who loves him just the way he is. Another theory is Julia is gonna indirectly break them up by playing with him and getting caught making Haley think brent cheated on him. Team brealey :)
Also your discord link says it's expired and invalid so I can't access it. I do still wish to chat with you. my discord user is in my bio! anyways until next time!
Author's Response:
I updated the link. I think I accidentally sent an invite that expired after 1 day. This one shouldn't expire.
Date: July 26 2020 3:33 AM Title: 1: Arrival
Just wanted to send a heads up. The discord invitation says expired
Author's Response:
Thank you. I updated the link. Hopefully this one works.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2020 7:04 AM Title: 11: A new setup
Very glad to see another update so soon. Really enjoyed reading about Brent's interactions with Haley and Julie along with the increase in size difference.
As for some things that I would love to see I can think of a few.
I'd love to see the measuring interaction again, but with Haley taking it a bit further. Possibly after marking her height she slightly lifts him up and down trying to guess his weight until he releases into her chest.
Another thing I would like to see is more comparison between Brent and the other guys to show how far behind he is size wise.
Maybe add in more scenes to show the power dynamic as Brent has to rely on Haley or Julie when being teased/bullied by other people.
Lastly I don't know how you would do it, but I have one sex position that I've never seen written. Have Brent sitting on another girls behind as they bend over with another girl straddling him. The first girl would start twerking which would control Brent going in and out. Just food forthought.
Date: July 18 2020 4:16 AM Title: 1: Arrival
Yup you are writing an excellent story so far man! Btw do you have discord or any way of communicating? I'd love to discuss more about the story in greater detail :) my discord in my bio if you got one!
Author's Response:
Just put a discord link in my bio.
Date: July 18 2020 12:38 AM Title: 11: A new setup
I'm gonna be honest I was so worried for sec with the whole julia and Brent sex scene... especially because Haley said "I didn't like what I saw when I arrived back at the dorm" so I didn't realize it was a dream LOL.
Not liking the way julia went from gentle and shy to straight out considering stealing him from Haley and potentially having sex witn him against his will. Well see how it goes from here.
brent also needs to watch out for Daniella and jessica now that they have a giantess fetish...
once again my small Critique would be the non labeling of the POVs. So far it seems to be between brent and Haley but If you do end up writing from other characters POVs I strongly suggest labeling them before each part.
Other than that excellent chapter as always ;) and I'm impressed that the length in the chapters continues to get bigger haha.
Author's Response:
Haha you're responses are what I expected them to be ngl. I like using the surprise factor, makes you have to think a little bit, but not too much. That's why I refrained from labeling the POV. And I'm 99% sure only Brent and Haley will use first person POV in the story. But I think maybe in my next story I'll label the POV if I have to since I'm going to avoid writing another sophisticated story like this one. I glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: July 14 2020 7:56 PM Title: 10: Jessella
Glad to see another great chapter! Enjoyed seeing the dynamic change as everyone starts growing around Brent. Can't wait to see what happens there. Loved the sex scene between the two, but would love to see how it works out with regular sex. Hopefully more interaction with the giant girls around him. Can't wait to read more.
Date: July 14 2020 1:40 AM Title: 10: Jessella
Awesome chapter! I gotta say I'm loving how the length of the chapters is increasing exponentially haha. Looks like Brent needs to watch out for Daniella... especially if Haley is not there to protect him. Same could be said about jessica now that both girls enjoyed their power over Mitchell. I'm happy that despite al that going on to Brent, Haley is still loyal. Still surprised Julia is starting to be portrayed as the villain wanting to steal Brent...
regarding some minor critiques, I noticed one major problem you've been having recently is POV. There was one point where it's told from brents pov so you used "I" and "me" but you also refer to him in the third person "he" and "him" in the same sentence. Watch out for that!
Another suggestion would be to label the POVs since I noticed you are now introducing the point of views from Brent and now Haley etc. helps in organization!
other than that, the story is just awesome, especially for a first story! As mentioned, I'm in your shoes as well haha just finished posting my first story a few weeks ago. Glad to see another newbie! :) can't wait for next chapter!
Date: July 13 2020 12:42 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
I gotta say, as a fellow new writer with a first story, this is impressive! I'm loving the world building, the characters. I'm guessing there's some deeper story to this behind the whole super human race they are building. Seems like they want to secretly weaponize the kids.
Surprised to see liz being mean to her brother with the new height she's gained. Also surprised to see Julia wanting you steal and potentially break Brent and Haley's relationship... she seemed so sweet and gentle before.
I was worried the way the story was heading, I thought it was being set up so that as Brent shrinks, Haley loses interest in him allowing Julia to be the one that truly cares but it's nice to see that isn't the case. Haley seems to be supportive to Brent forever!
I look forward to reading more of this story! Keep it up man! :)
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 2:27 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
Nice chapter! Haley is truly a loving girl, hope the best for the couple, even if there's Julia who is looking for him.
I was suprised by Liz sudden dominance over her brother, but I liked that the other giantess stop her and say that she must respect him, to not let the power go over her head. Nice!!
I liked also the sex scene, the couple speking like a baby was fun to read.
A final note to Mitchell.. his plan backfired, kinda.
Can't wait for next part!!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 12:01 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
Glad to see another update! I know from experience how annoying It is to write and post from a phone, but this chapter was really great. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 12:01 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
Glad to see another update! I know from experience how annoying It is to write and post from a phone, but this chapter was really great. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 11 2020 4:41 AM Title: 8: New Bod New Me
Man, what a enjohable story! Thanks for not rushing and setting the plot nixely with the first chapters.
Regarding this chspter, I'm glad Mitchell aparently may not grow at all. I found his behaviour creepy and was afraid of him reaping the benefits.
And oh boy, looks like Brent, for all his talk about becoming gods and perfect, may be the one of the few who won't experience growth. I can't wait to see the reactions when Hally and his sister become big like Julia.
Cant wait for the next chapter. Please, keep on!
[Report This]Date: July 10 2020 11:24 PM Title: 8: New Bod New Me
Really enjoyed this chapter as well. Would love to see the julie and Brent bit in live action. Enjoyed seeing the hormones react differently to Brent than anyone else. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Also you confused Brent and Eric several times during this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I didn't even notice! I must have been so used to typing erotic content with Eric that I accidentally plugged his name in places they should not be. Eric's significance to the plot is going to die down a bit so hopefully I won't make this mistake again. I'm glad your enjoying the story so far as well!
[Report This]Date: July 10 2020 12:00 AM Title: 7: A Freak of Science
Loved the giant and gentle Julia. I liked her initial fear of being a freak, then, thanks to Brent, she starts a little to appreciate her body, and becoming friends with him. and I wanted to stay on her body too, like Brent :P
About the categories, maybe you had to put all the one you needed when you started publishing the story, and now it's useless? I don't know anyhting about this site, so it's just my theory.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the open thoughts, and I don't know a ton about this site either I've been on for less than a month lol.
And of course I would never have written abt lying down on Julia if didn't think about it first😁
[Report This]Date: July 09 2020 11:21 PM Title: 7: A Freak of Science
Really enjoying the story so far. Will we get a chance to see F/m? It would be cool to see how different sex is when you take in the size difference combined with stuff like pheromones and genetics. Would love to see Brent try it out with Julie or a enlarged Haley.
Author's Response:
Chapter I just uploaded should do the job. As Haley gets bigger we will see more sexual interaction between Brent Julia and Haley. I plan to do something with Mitchell too, although interactions with him won't be as passionate 😉
[Report This]Date: July 08 2020 12:37 PM Title: 5: The Guinea Pigs Emerge
It seems that the serum works, yay!!! Can't wait for the growth!!!
Date: July 08 2020 7:51 AM Title: 1: Arrival
Great story so far. Love the characters and tone so far. Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2020 6:35 AM Title: 4: Young Mitchell
Good chapter! Some more normal moments before the growing!!! Can't wait!