[Report This]Date: January 10 2023 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
Wow, this chapter was flat out amazing! I love the thought of each mother going home with the other’s son and it almost feels like they have been put into a long term sort of detention, and I think that’s awesome!
Roberta putting Tommy in her panties was perfect! I like that we didn’t even need dialogue since that act alone was enough to seal his fate. Also, it could be a sign that he has no say in the matter and anything he says will just be mild vibrations to her.
For Kyle, I like how we see things from his perspective and how his own mother barely addressed him as she left. It’s clear what the priorities are and Roberta and Joanne seem to be focused on themselves and their new toys rather than the safety of their sons, and that makes things entertaining.
I think since each mother is playing with a new toy, they might be more willing to push their limits than they would if they were playing with their own sons. I’m loving this new stage in this story and would love to see the new details of Tommy and Kyle’s lives.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2023 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whenever I read some of your stories, I make up continuations in my head where the suffering characters involved escape and find salvation in the care of a gentle giantess. Partly because I enjoy stories of abused and traumatized tinies getting saved and healed, but also due to the intensity of the violence. The way you express the psychological torture and trauma is inspiring.
I'm not a fan of dumb and too unhygienic dominants though - I experienced both mothers as grown up toddlers. I like the cunning sort more. They can be disgusting and the like as long as it is not a part of their persona.
I found a lot of parts hard to read, which is most likely due to the fact that I am not native English. Nonetheless, this created the thought that the language you use here is a bit over the top and comical.
I enjoyed the vivid descriptions and fitting analogies and try to come back for inspiration on how to write certain parts in the English language.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2022 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 28
Glancing through and had the fucking unfortunate displeasure of seeing scat content unmarked. While it's not unexpected considering the way the story progressed it nevertheless repulsed me. Please tag your shit if you're going to include shit.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2022 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 30
Is Kyle doing to die?
Like that would be a powerful way to go, trapped between two horny BBW Milfs.
Plus might show his mother the gravity of her actions.....or not, she might keep going.
But the fact he's in such pain/injury, I think if they go all out, or continue to, he's going to die.
I am excited to see how the story wraps up. And curious if there will be any sequels/continuations set with some other members of their group.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2022 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh Kyle's deeeefinitely going to be going up her butt as well as her pussy...
Horny morally/ethically screwed up Milf's seem to be the winners in this story as proven time and time again, so I doubt Kyle is going to get a happy ending (but Joanne and Roberta surely are)
Date: August 12 2022 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 27
Weird to think this long running story is concluding.
Date: July 13 2022 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
oh my. i hope Joanne follows through on her threat to Tommy. Imagine if in her anger she sucks on him and makes him hard before using him that way after a colossal dump. The trauma of Tommy connecting that to arousal and orgasm. so cruel.
Date: June 10 2022 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
Dios mio que maravillosa historia, el personaje de Joanne y Tommy es espectacular y maravilloso, no dejo de pensar en esta historia, enhorabuena, estoy deseando ver que cosas mas se le ocurren a Joanne
[Report This]Date: February 24 2022 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Damn these two guys are getting put through the ringer in this chapter.
Again you show a detailed and descriptive experience of their time inside their respective GTS as well as do a great job making the reader visualize and imagine the atmosphere of these womens bodies.
As well as the differing personalities, and vernacular of both women.
I mean these women are tone deaf to their children's pleas and hatred of their situation, but I guess they're pleasure addled minds just won't or can't accept the truth that they hate being used as sex toys XD
Great work as always on this chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2021 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is Kyle finally gonna take the backdoor entrance?!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2021 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Once again, this is one of the best stories ever.
Date: October 17 2021 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
ssecuestrara Joanne a kyle? sinceramente ansio ver el próximo capítulo, mil gracias por este fabuloso relato
Date: October 08 2021 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
¡¡¡Dios mio!!! el personaje de Joanne es maravilloso y el saber como describe y se da placer llevando a Su hijo en sus bragas pegado a su entrepierna es espectacular,estoy deseando leer mas historia de Joanne abusando de Su hijo o de Kyle,mi enhorabuena,es increible leer tus historias
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. There's still a lot more to come
Date: July 03 2021 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am so excited to see what the next chapter brings! Your writing has been overflowing with erotic passion so far, and now that it's going down the anal route I'm anticipating it like crazy! His own mother's gigantic asshole eager to devour him whole, while enormous swirling storms of gas build from within her bowels... it's a perfect set-up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: February 27 2021 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
This was so hot!
I would not be surprised if she finally takes her hitachi vibrator and uses it while having poor Tommy still in panties :-)
Author's Response:
Pretty much anything is possible in a story like this.
Date: February 08 2021 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was easily one of the hottest chapters of anything I've ever read. Amazing work!
Author's Response:
Much appreciated
[Report This]Date: January 17 2021 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is an excellent story. So well written and exciting! I can't wait how it continues.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing
Date: November 11 2020 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Btw, not sure how she was worried to squish him keeping him in her pocket and sat down without a care in the world now, but for once I don't care :D
Author's Response:
You'll find that kind of fetishy logic very common in this particular story.
Date: November 10 2020 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Not really my kind of story, but even in that case I do look from time to time and, well, this chapter was worth the wait :)
[Report This]Date: August 27 2020 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
I don't always comment, but I gotta say I always wait for your next chapter and it never disapoint!! You're a really talented writer. thx a lot for the naughty stories :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading